BIGPAPPA76 vs. DaCROZofHB
 

aight hommie its rematch time brotha!

10-20 lines max

you know the rules (no DR or crew votes, etc)

hey dawg even tho i gotta rip on ya a little u still my dawg brotha man.

ill spit dis shit first.

goodluck hommie

ayo check dis shit right quick......

lil play nigga from "huntington fuckin beach" thinkin he got what it takes/
BIGPAPPA here to put you in yo' place you fuckin mental case/
Crozzy actin all gangsta with his mafioso crew/
well croz ya best move when i grab my gat and get ready to drop a few... rhymes that is/
nigga dont know shit bout nothin in dis fuckin rap battle biz.../
BIGPAPPA shoots lyrical bullets from AKs and TEK-9s/
put down yo' cap gun nigga and stop wastin all PAPPAs fuckin time/

aight imma bout to lay yo' broke ass down for da count.../
oh wait... thats right... i already KOd yo ass before nigga wit no doubt./
BIGPAPPA done killed yo ass 2 times and each time was a million times illa../
by now little crozzy should know not to fuck with the REAL LYRICAL RHYME KILLA!!/
cause you aint no real gangsta ass nigga/
if you was then you would have no problem pullin da itchy trigga/
but you do dawg cause you scared to battle/
its aight tho... heres your bottle and bib, go and play wit yo' rattle/
bitch you betta be ready when BIGPAPPA spits a tight ass verse/
cause yo' shit so dry looks like a mummy wit' a thousand year curse/
nigga hurry yo ass up and get on stage and shout.../
but be ready sucka cause yet again BIGPAPPA KNOCKED YOU DA FUCK OUT!!!!!!!/

BIGPAPPA76

where you at hommie
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Every fuckin battle dis Nigga's sayin da Same Shit/
Must keep forgettin to swallow cuz its da Same Spit/
Got me once when I was a Rook, but now I gotta Vision/
Rhymes are feelin fresher than a Crook, straight out da Prison/
I can tell in ya words you look more Shook, like when you went Gay for ya Final Decison/
My Crew Mafioso packin mo heat than da Fukin Sopranos/(HBO)
But when shit hits it da fan, you wont have da luxury of Changin da Channel/
Croz was put on dis Earth, to destroy lame Niggas like BigPappa/
Guess he should of known not to fuck wit da REAL LYRICAL SHOW STOPPA/
Bitch is a has-been on dis site, A played out Muthafucka/
Get a new Fuckin Closer, I can't believe you Played out Chris Tucka/
I end dis Niggas Life, someone quickly hand me da Chrome/
Make sure theres no chance, put fuckin 9 to his Dome/
Smokin bitches like you more than fuckin Capone/
Faggot tryin so hard to Make it in dis game and it Shows/
Homie I wouldnt accept ya if I SHAT on yo face and you were da Biggest Brown-Nose/...shit that is

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pretty good battle, but i gotta give it to bigpappa, he had more flow, keep doin wat u do

bigpappa had the punches, cause dacs didnt come as hard
the multies wen t 2 big also cause he jus made it like dac was stupid
this battle was pretty good though i liked both of yall, but 2 me, big jus came a little bit harder at everything, but still good job, for battlen, keep elevate though

uppin... dont sleep on dis shit people..uppin...........

shit stop sleepin on this..... this was a good fuckin battle... UPPIN

lets get some votes up in dis thing

first of all props to both emcees that came out today, this was good entertainment. Nice verses all around.
here's the verdict.

BIGPOPPA-a nice structure at a glance. I can feel a lot of hype energy behind your verse. As if you were A.feeling your verse, or B. just a generally hyped battler. And i respect that. Some of the most lyrically ill rappers lack energy and you seem to have it. UNfortunately what you lack is lyrical content, and wordplay. THese are key elements in battles be it internet, at the party, or on stage at a battle club. A good example is MC battles II on mtv, where there was a guy who i think battled Blind Fury and got ate up. He had insane energy, but no lyrical content or punchlines. And you are just doing a lot of yelling with no good wordplay or punchlines, it can often be worse than a monotone guy with nice lines. So i suggest you study up on what people generally see as ill in terms of lyrics and be influenced by ill rappers, BUT take it in you're own direction.


DACROZOFHB-

Every fuckin battle dis Nigga's sayin da Same Shit/
Must keep forgettin to swallow cuz its da Same Spit/

that's a good opener right there. A quick jab to keep him off you and then you follow with that cross. I liked it. i like the element of the 'beef', in the sense that you two have battled before, it makes one more into the battle itself. What you had was key punchline needed to get over. I think that since that loss you have been more observant of how to be iller than your opponent.

My Crew Mafioso packin mo heat than da Fukin Sopranos/(HBO)
But when shit hits it da fan, you wont have da luxury of Changin da Channel/

that's nice, i'm liking the verse. Just enough to snag a victory, and get your pride back. Now it's time for the tie breaker.

my vote goes to Croz

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