e-dubz(maf.) vs. blackthief(c.s.)
 

iight due tomoro 6/23 at midnight
no hate, crew or d/r votes
blind spit, no feeding
10-14 lines
goodluck..dis is ma check in

check in....




check in.....






oh did I say check in?
oh ok I did...
just makin sure I checked in...
I sure would hate to not check in you know?
Ok Im gonna stop talkin now
really
damnit...

iight im spittin now, i dont kno if imma be here tomorrow, no feeding

watch how i diminish-his-text-plus-hes-far-from-owning-the-greats
so its easy to finish-his-rep-cuz-his-bars-dont-hold-any-weight
your flow is weak you know we sleep so instead of w's from you we catching our z's
it only seems that you make an impact on the 'board' when you be smashin the 'keys'
im hard and stoning his face with bullets that r breaking his dome
and the only way your going out with a w is if your dating ya clone
your basically old and on scorecards your often blank in punches
cuz the only time he came out swingin is when he fought his mate in public
faggot, and in your area you should watch your back and guard ya life
cuz you must live in a ghetto the way your structures far from nice
and basically dawg like pubs durin prohibition your a waste of a bar
cuz your punches never connected so why should i break em apart
face it im hard and after U like V so your stuck fightin me, whore
im likely to score cuz i pop fruits so your not seen as tight anymore

laughin at this whack cat thinkin hes really good
Only in wintertime is e-dubz really hood
easily dismantling you...ya skills is so-so
definition of a whack crew?look up Mafioso
is seems to me that u cant take a hint
son you're like a handicap linebacker,u fail to make a hit
make u "devour" your sour llines so can actually "spit"
with a name like e-dubz...its only natural that you're shit
barely 16 years old yet his sig talkin bout violence
son u still in high school..whats so violent bout u?silence...
and Ill admit it....ya flow is a little bit edgy
but mine would be too if I was the only kid still gettin wedgies
just another sorry nigga with pent-up rage
but ya flow is way off point...like a bent up blade....

uppin dis shit..

uppin fo my homey theif....CHRYME SINDICATE...WHO WANT IT!!!

uppin for dubz....................................

WHAATTTT luvin tha opener from dubs that was crzzy yo
but ye yu both put out crazy verses nice personalz and nice punches both had crazy flow and structure nice reppin yall
but ye i think e-dubz got this battle cuz i liked his verse better but ye good lookin home bois be easy wun..

v/e-dubz

this is a very very close battle i got to wait before i can vote but ill be sure to later

uppin..

yo dubz man nice fuckin opener i liked it u both had crazy punches and personals good reppin of your crews but i was feelin edubz a lil more but good battle boyz keep that shit up

vote=edubz

e-DuBz got this shit...his punches was just a little harder than Black's...and tha flow was nice wit it...yo structure was ok...xcept for 2 lines which u stretch'd those out..
E-DuBz gets my vote cause...his punches was harder than Black's & they landed...peace...

uppin to close dis...leave links

edubz won this easily...purely on the punches...his verse was alittle more stretched...but what are you going to do...his punches still hit alot harder and made more sense...i also liked his style more...good job to both emcees...

respect to both...
thief i've seen you drop better stuff then this...

please vote on the battle in my sig...thanks

Ye i think e-dubz got this. he had better punches.. and yeh his flow was tighter.. I enjoyed it..

This battle wasnt AMAZING.. but it was alright.. good work both of you.. though i know you both have dropped better..

Anyways things to work on.. Personals.. Wordplay.. n yeh.... thats about it..

Alright battle from both... but my votes goin to Dubz..

Peace