mjust23~vs~whiteyonthemic
 

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yo, i peeped ya last battle and dog, im impressed//
that u could spit and take ya tampon out while gettin undressed//
u shouldnt be battlen, ya flow is supremly wack//
punches,multies, and a dick is wat u lack//
like micheal jackson at court, u have no style//
speakin of himi heard u got educated on how to petafile//
faggot ass probaly starin at tom cruise on da sofa//
exept wen u stare hes doctor phil and ur oprah//
today ur a man, 2morrow ur not//
u cross over more than iverson wen hes hot//
bring in cash, so dey call me dough man//
this cats pussy, am i battlen a guy or lindsey lohan//
ma punches are stronger than ma right hook//
faggot, all u gotta do is fuc a man, u already got the look//
a few battles ago, i was strugglin to rhyme//
but since i elevated, im taken ma time//
it used 2 take me an hour jus to finish 1 line//
now it takes me 5 minutes to unload the clip to the tec-9//
wen it comes to given head, ur on top//
hell, wen it comes 2u and steve.......ur on top. 1

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alright man im checked in lets get this shit started
you go first

look its a poser, was that suppose to make to laugh
those lyrics were mentaly challenged looking like kids craft
my words are to sophisticated to be related to yours
your still underground im on the top playing tours
your not all their you broght this wack ass plan
im trying to get to the top when im facing an arab from iran
roasting your ass is to easy to be considered a blast
All your raps look like somthing that came out the past
you need to gather you money and get your mom off the corner
because this aint nothing but an easy learner
rippin the track is to easy its like how your sisters on crack
when you were a kid did they leave you out?
the challenge you made is mine without a big bout
your whole familys fucked up just like the brady bunch
but in this turn your lifes over, your fucked, so go have some lunch
oh wait im not done yet i got to know, which shack is your home
this shits to easy ill just go their and beat in your dome
let me be the one to tell you that you failed
im done your actions are to delayed

wont let me vote, cause i dont have 20 posts, but mj got it

aight this was an easy battle to vote on... MJ just shit all over this newbie... MJs flow and structure where on lock... i didnt like Whiteyonthemic 's shit at all.. no hate tho... MJ came harder with the punches and personals as well... this one was a no contest from begining to end.... keep elevatin whitey... good battle both of you

VOTE- MJ

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alright, my vites gonna MJust .......in my opinion he had a better flow and he had more and better punches

faggot ass probaly starin at tom cruise on da sofa//
exept wen u stare hes doctor phil and ur oprah//


bring in cash, so dey call me dough man//
this cats pussy, am i battlen a guy or lindsey lohan//
ma punches are stronger than ma right hook//
faggot, all u gotta do is fuc a man, u already got the look


line in my opinion won the battle

yo dis was a good battle but ima hav tog igv dis to mj b/c he led in punches, rhymes, multis, etc good battle tho guyz 1

line u did good but u started fallin off keep writin tho u'll elevate good shyt tho 1

uppin for votes yall, c'mon, i'll return da favor so hit up the battle yall

we need some votes yall, c'mon....................

Flow- jus about equal but mjust took it on this one
Puches-Mjust u destroyed whitey on diz, whitey u got to have harder punches
Complexity and Orignaility-Mjust is just more experienced and why he took u here, i liked da one about oprah

All in all an ok battle

Vote MJUst

___Whitey i replied to ur callout

Right in my opinion Mjust got this, his battle was much betta all round

"yo, i peeped ya last battle and dog, im impressed//
that u could spit and take ya tampon out while gettin undressed//"
Thats a sweet opener, the only bit i didnt like with Mjust's verse was the closin line, that just wasnt workin for me.

"you need to gather you money and get your mom off the corner
because this aint nothing but an easy learner"

weakest line of the battle, what is goin on therre?

"my words are to sophisticated to be related to yours
your still underground im on the top playing tours"

That was the only line i could pick out of whitey's battle, even though there is no chance of that happenin right now,
I know I'm still aparantly 'New to RB' but i just gotta say whitey, elevate man.

Vote Mjust