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Dead Nor Alive 06-23-04 01:09 PM

I gotta lotta luv 4 you dawg!!!!
 
i set it up drop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dead Nor Alive 06-23-04 01:27 PM

Dropp'n it right now!!!!!!
 
chea chea

I do what i do
you would 2 if you knew what i knew

Why you come @ me like you ain't have nothing else to do?

did i really piss you off dat bad?
naw nigga i ain't think so!!

can't you see i own the game,i made it
i got the blueprints in city hall
under my name

you can get off my dick now cuz u don't know were i'm from

fuck da dirtysouth
i'm try'n to shut up cuz i got a dirty mouth

Da jokah
is a rhyme choka

don't hate on me cuz my rhymes is dope'a

you gettin me all worked up--i need to go smoke again!!
i gotta little cash now but i ain't goin back to bein broke again

fuck 10 lines--dats some pussy shit
da way you came @ me i could tell you had a pussy bitch

i could lose dis match
but i'd jus cook yo soft ass up in another batch

i better thangs to do so holla @ me later

Dead Nor Alive 06-23-04 06:49 PM

i guess i won by a no-show
 
why didn't you show up pimp? i thought you wa bout something!!

J Gutta 06-23-04 07:02 PM

ayo check check

Yo i aint leavin u DEAD NOR ALIVE im leavin u stunned//
Oviously wit two glocks loaded beef up iam leavin u gunned//
Understand waat iam sayin kidd.,iam from tha streets//
leave ya hole chest open..so ya pigons can eat tha meat//
And wen u talkin shit bout me u better learn qwickly//
I kno were ya hoe iz and i definetly no were ma dick b//
New..huh son well let me tell u this ya whole flows wrong//
Teleport to ya crib and ill tell ya..ya damn hoes wrong//
u aint gansta u aint no thug tha catagory u in is snitches//
Shouldnt have came at me..cuz i dont punch da bitches//
Hell boi why u even alive i told ya moms to leave u dead//
Intelligent she wasnt i told her abortion but it didnt stick in her head//
Tell me boi u got ice packs for tha punches ive been layin on u//
god dammit from ya bitch to da clippers they even be playin on u//
shit iam done and my times up and i just tried to get my rhyme out//
ayo check home boi wun ..dont cry..a fuck it iam out//

e.z niggas ...wun

J Gutta 06-23-04 07:03 PM

uppin diz muh fuckah..e.z niggas wun...

Dead Nor Alive 06-23-04 07:08 PM

dat wuz tight son
 
now all we can do is see who was hot and who was cold,. but its all good if you won i'll come back @ cha!!!!!

J Gutta 06-23-04 07:10 PM

aight b...nice drop home boi.. be easy wun..uppin diz aight

DON 06-23-04 07:13 PM

joker good battle...dead u needed work on ur verse werent hard punches.they werent hard and they were very weak. not a great flow either it was a very weak verse.
joker u did a lot better good strucutre the message goin down you aint shit that was a good idea that made the structure look better. nice personals good solid punches. overall a good verse.

v/jokah

Dead Nor Alive 06-23-04 07:15 PM

Maybe we can do it again!!
 
you got me i gotta hand it to you but if you win trust i'll be back!!!!!!!


-----------LOTTA LUV--------D<N>A------------------------

J Gutta 06-23-04 07:17 PM

aihgt man ill be waitin for tha rematch aight b..wun

e-dubz 06-23-04 07:32 PM

jokah u got dis wit better punches and a overall better verse..dead ur lines were a little short..jus elevate and b more complex

J Gutta 06-23-04 09:34 PM

uppin diz muh fuckah aight ...holla back wun.........

Prolicx 06-23-04 09:42 PM

dead nor alive ur wack as fuck, you barely rhymed you was to basic, no structure or punches.
da jokah had good punchs flow an structure, erything was betta than his, so my vote goes to you.

cookie 06-23-04 09:47 PM

Da Johka took that home dude, Dead or alive, you suck

roop 06-23-04 09:50 PM

easy win for jokah sry dead but he just has more experience than him, everybody get better has they go on, let me just explain my vote

Flow-Jokah mad flow, u had none
Punches-Duh Jokah
Complexity-Jokah won here cuz hes experienced

Vote Jokah


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