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$ik Vs. Horus(thetruth)
ok, no crew votes, no feeding off, 20 lines max.
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Aight...yo check it..
Like clovers with no leafs, your bad luck and like Stingy Hoes you just Suck And even if yu were 2 of 50 Cent you wouldn’t be worth a Buck Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz Ya Weak,-Kid! I'll Flip-Lidz to say I Reversed-Your-Thoughtz Ya couldn't Stop-Me-With-Wordz like Juvenillez-Ignorin'-Security-Copz Like Kerosine, ya Burned-Quick! Expect ya Heart-Soon-Shattered Like Sewin'-Letterz-From-Bookz, ya L'z-Got-A-Pattern Ya Shit'z-Weak! Put a Time-Limit? Fuckin' Prove-Tha-Factz Put a new Meanin'-To-Meow-Mix how I Shred-This-Cat Now I see why everybody you meet seems to Hate-Ya-Shit Cuz when you accept the battle you constantly Wait-To-Spit |
OK Check it,
yo, i've looked back on your battles and your rhymin is shook/ you think that you can beat me? you must be kinda mistook/ you can't write rhymes, so try writin a book/ to me rap's easy as fishing, i stay with strong lines and a hook/ we'll just read your gibberish while your babbling on/ coz you don't stand a chance, only way i loose is if i battle my clone/ you say your $ik, shit, you really should be $ik of writing trash kid/ coz i don't understand your lyrics, like your speakin with an accent/ why does this hypocandriac think that he is "sick"/ when your nothing more than what comes out of my ass.... a peice of shit/ i'm already bored with you, you MC's be on that same shit/ $ik, face it, your rhymes are just fake like you got you lyrics from the matrix/ you ain't shit just don't even try, murder you is what i will do/ fuck guns, in battles i spit hard enough for my saliva to kill you/ dark thoughts, like my brain was made from melanin/ just realize that i'm better bitch, i have more intelligence/ your luke warm man, you really don't got heat/ you think your "hard" huh, how about i dip you in concrete/ ya'll iv'e ended his career now, you see how i rattled him/ your done, God can't even save you, and if he tries then i'll battle him/ |
damn... this the kinda battles i like.. fuck all the writing book shit, this was nice and to the point.. i liked the way how i coudl spit both verses and it sound tight, and not like iw as reading a paper.. aight here it goes:
$ik:i liked your rhyme sheme, it was nice to read something differnt.. Easily Knock-Aside-Ya-Punchez, like puttin' Doorz Nex-Ta-Fists Like Dehydrated-Midgit-Bungeez, ya Fall-Too-Short for Top-Spitz ^ nice punch, i think you shoulda opened with it.. nice bar.. Fuckin' Shake-Ya-Cranium! Like Brainz-Placed-In-Blenderz Ya Sequeled-Health-Moviez! Don't Come-Complete in Sickest-Enderz ^i also liked this punch.. creative overal verse was about a 7.6/10 horus: we'll just read your gibberish while your babbling on/ coz you don't stand a chance, only way i loose is if i battle my clone/ ^kinda of played, but i liked the arrangement of it,sounded good you say your $ik, shit, you really should be $ik of writing trash kid/ coz i don't understand your lyrics, like your speakin with an accent/ ^well put together i thought.. overall verse was a 7.4/10 i fel sik got it, only cause he had more punches in it.. horus sounded better, but there was a lil self glorification in that verse, and not enuff punches.. both verses were hott, i just was feeling sik's verse more.. |
alright check it...Sik jus got this Barely...cause he had a sick opener and good punmches
siK: ILL PUnches mayn i was feelin em...much respect...ur personals were there..but your structure and flow was bad...your vocab was there too...good effort horus: you had better sstructure and flow but fell short on punches and personals....and thats where he got you....good job for a newb...keep elevatin u have potential vote :SIK can u return the favour and vote for this..thanz http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085 |
Vote = Sik
Flow - Sik (Horus, your flow kept changin through the whole thing...Sik, your flow was aight, but a few parts chopped) Punches - Sik (Punches were funny as hell: Kids ignorin security cops was my favorite...Horus, you had a bunch, but only a few hit hard, the rest were just average) Multis - Tie (Both had some good strong multis) Metas - Sik (Perfect metas...worked great with every punchline) Personals - Sik (Horus had a couple and they were extremely weak) You both doin ya thing, props...I think this goes to Sik though |
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sik got dis wit better punches and personals..good battle tho..horus nice flow jus elevate wit punches
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iight, if it came down to only punches i think that Sik had it by like a .4 difference. I like Horus's structure, u really kept it together and your scheme was better.
BUT Sik had better personals. Horus, juss elevate more on tha personals and u would've gotten my vote. Vote:Sik |
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