Dissonance VS $ik
 

10-12 lines
First to 5 wins
No feeding, recycling, biting, or bitching
If you got problems, discuss em like a man, not a bitch.

Due date: Anytime today in the next few hours.
I called you out, I'll drop first.
Check in then take ya time, I don't want a half-assed verse
(If I'm gonna get murked, I want to have a good excuse :p )

Checking In. Shouldn't be too long

....................CheCk CheCk........................

When you was born they called it a "Medic Emergency!"
And like you "lost the urge in(e-r-g-e-n)" spitin, you got left with just: "Sik Emcee"

So with Sickness I’ll attack and leave ya black with Tha-Boubonic
And if Ya-Do-Want-It, my bloods runnin with nothing But-True-Tonic

Kid You’s-A-"Comic", cuz that’s the only way that you be "Crackin-Me-Up"
Still hooked on ya Phonics, you Lackin, go Back and Practice-Ya-Stuff

Ya Dancin with a crazy "Bull", Chancin-Wrath while you Just-A-"Calf"
Not ta toot on my own "Horn", but you don’t want me ta "Thrust"-Ma-Raps

I’ll rip ya in half’, lookin for the guts I know you don’t have
Anger "Multiplied" by hard-A bitch…you do the "Math"

.....................Uppin For Votes........................

hahaha "Cerebal Extract, Dissonance Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat"

that was just mean...lol

VOTE UP KIDS

breakdown

first up is sik
We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day
U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away
5
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There
5
Performing Lyrical Magic, Just Call Me The Houdini Of This Game
Making This Cat Disappear, No Matter, No One Even Knows Your Name
7
Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse
This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse
6
My Verbal Anticts, Putting Lyrical Stress On Ya Heart, Verbal Attack
Cerebal Extract, Dissonance Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat
8

decent...nice closer...that was the only thing that was funny...it was also original...

diss-
When you was born they called it a "Medic Emergency!"
And like you "lost the urge in(e-r-g-e-n)" spitin, you got left with just: "Sik Emcee"
6
So with Sickness I’ll attack and leave ya black with Tha-Boubonic
And if Ya-Do-Want-It, my bloods runnin with nothing But-True-Tonic
4
Kid You’s-A-"Comic", cuz that’s the only way that you be "Crackin-Me-Up"
Still hooked on ya Phonics, you Lackin, go Back and Practice-Ya-Stuff
5
Ya Dancin with a crazy "Bull", Chancin-Wrath while you Just-A-"Calf"
Not ta toot on my own "Horn", but you don’t want me ta "Thrust"-Ma-Raps
5
I’ll rip ya in half’, lookin for the guts I know you don’t have
Anger "Multiplied" by hard-A bitch…you do the "Math"
5


^^^decent but remember what wins battles...punches...you really didn't have any strong let alone decent punches...

honest vote = sik...respect to both emcees...

return the favor you guys please vote on this battle...

heres the link...
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=130312

to be honest with you D came more proper with the punches n tryna have a go at word play n shit, n he comin wit multiz although the shit was lil arkward to read, i enjoyed siks verse more but really Dissonance had a stroger foundation on his shit not just 1 word rhymes n that.

so vote dissonance

sik toook this wit eas he came wit da flow da punches da err thing feel me
v/sik

The both of ya'lls styles are pgood and u both had pretty good punches
BUT
Sik had much more word play like the Hudini lne was a factor.
Dissonance u have to come a bit more cleaner with the scheme, but your gettin there i see, juss elevate and take your time dogg
Vote: Sik

sik got dis battle because he had better punches
had da flow over the other guy, and just came harder....
v=sik

hit up dis when u getta chance
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131036

props to both lyricists on this one, it was nice one,respecting the verses in here today.
here's the verdict.

Dissonance-Always a fan of that structure you took. IT really sets us up to read the verse. Points on that alone. But also the verse didn't dissappoint either

Ya Dancin with a crazy "Bull", Chancin-Wrath while you Just-A-"Calf"
Not ta toot on my own "Horn", but you don’t want me ta "Thrust"-Ma-Raps

that was nice! i definatly felt the word play on that one. keep at it.

$ik-Decent structure, but i get a definate vibe that you think you don't have to spit much to win. or at least over your opponent on this one. Because i felt no energy behind this verse, or even that you were trying to win or you were hungry for the win. I know a lot better can come from you and I'm fairly dissappoint in the mediocrity in this verse. however what i do like is the last line how the words
Verbal Attack connect to
Cerebal Extract
i liked the flow of that. Other than that i'm not to into this verse truth be told.

i vote for Dissonance

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Dissonance drop:

When you was born they called it a "Medic Emergency!"
And like you "lost the urge in(e-r-g-e-n)" spitin, you got left with just: "Sik Emcee"
I SAY THIS GETS A 7/10 AT BEST.....
So with Sickness I’ll attack and leave ya black with Tha-Boubonic
And if Ya-Do-Want-It, my bloods runnin with nothing But-True-Tonic
UH NOPE NOT FEELING THIS PUNCH 6/10
Kid You’s-A-"Comic", cuz that’s the only way that you be "Crackin-Me-Up"
Still hooked on ya Phonics, you Lackin, go Back and Practice-Ya-Stuff
NAW NOT LIKING IT 5/10
Ya Dancin with a crazy "Bull", Chancin-Wrath while you Just-A-"Calf"
Not ta toot on my own "Horn", but you don’t want me ta "Thrust"-Ma-Raps
WEAK UMMMM I SAY THIS IS A 5/10
I’ll rip ya in half’, lookin for the guts I know you don’t have
Anger "Multiplied" by hard-A bitch…you do the "Math"
AIGHT DECENT PUNCH 7/10

OVERALL:6/10///60%

$ik Drop:

We Can Play Simon Says and We Can Call This Oppisite Day
U Can Command A Win, But $ik Will Just Take It Away
AIGHT PUNCH NOT THE GREATEST THO 5.5/10
Verbally Slay This Cat, Cause All You Spit Is Hot-Air
Your Ego Is Inflated, On My Level, Bitch Realize, Your Not There
AIGHT NICE PUNCH 7.5/10
Performing Lyrical Magic, Just Call Me The Houdini Of This Game
Making This Cat Disappear, No Matter, No One Even Knows Your Name
AIGHT NOT THAT GOOD 6/10
Might As Well Call Me Lil Flip, The Way I'm Revising Ya Verse
This Game's Over, I Can See Them Now, Already Carrying In Ya Hearse
LIKE THE WORDPLAY IN THIS 7/10
My Verbal Anticts, Putting Lyrical Stress On Ya Heart, Verbal Attack
Cerebal Extract, Dissonance Sucks Dick, Now Put A Sticky Thread On Dat
8/10 BEST PUNCH OF YOUR DROP.

OVERALL 7.3/10//73%

VOTE GOES TO: $ik

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