T-Bo Vs. Horus(thetruth)
 

alright i'm here, let's both start at the same time///

alright son, I'm checkin' in lets go and good luck to you

Nigga I'm like a mothafuckin' ho and dick I'm a fiend fa tha green/
Damn dog Ya shit stay like a fuckin' Jenny Craig ho ya pockets stay lean/
Nigga my shit stay overweight like someone's uncle after thnxgiving day/
I smash on lil' wanna be's like U don't waste time talkin' juss take tha AK and spray/
On my bloc my niggaz call me tha mothafuckin' dean cuz I see more green than a fuckin' weed fiend/
Nigga U steppin' to me iz like Lil' Wayne tryin' to pick a fight wit big daddy Shaq/
Don't be mad at me cuz I got ya gurl at my place callin' me daddy as I hit it from da back/
Now I'll end dis shit wit a fuck U and ya lil' azz dildo/
As i walk away wit 4 fingerz up wit 'em twisted in tha middle/

damn doggie I came off fuckin' weak on dat one, oh well. There's my shit

You Must be kiddin me, a whack cat whose rhyme is hallow and shows no density/
i show no empathy, show this slow ho some misery, low blows to hit his spleen/
wallow in pain, your about to get toppled today/
i know why you can't spit, you've already swallowed, in vain/
just follow the game, or get roasted/
or get hit with baseball bats, splittin your bones like Osteoporosis/
furocious and explosive, sick as fuck was might diagnosis/
you'll get slapped like a ho bitch, and stamped like postage/
oh shit, ya no this is what i don't understand/
why crappy MC's like you rhyme about shit and stretch the truth, like rubber bands/
listen brother man, you could be helium, you're still not soarin higher/
to make sure, i hit spliffs and burn more "trees" than forest fires/
your a liar, you can flow, matter of fact, you should a be a singer or an actor/
some one must of hypnotized you because you think that your a rapper/i
i won't even blink at your disater, try to beat me on the next day/
coz you got bitch in you, and i can see it like an X-Ray/
fuck it man i gotta stand/
coz this punk don't belong in the leauge, like Jawanna Man/

whassup wit the votes ya'll?

:shoot: Hey yo, looking fa votes folk don't be sleepin'

ummm.. v/horus...

T-Bo- your verse didnt have any punches that hi at all =/... you need to work on less filler and more content if you wanna elevate..

Horus- a nice lil verse, but you need to try and get ur self-glorification down a lil bit, not rippen em up enuff.. i think if you use self glorification like:
i show no empathy, show this slow ho some misery, low blows to hit his spleen/
^that should have been the setup for a nice lil punch... thats if you use sef glorification in my eyes...

v/horus.. aside from teh skill difference3 is looks like, tbo didnt really attack horus and thats why my vote is what it is..

I agree, I have to go with Horus also because he had a few punches in there, and his overall flow was better anyway, so my vote is for Horus(thetruth)

Yo, Horus, did you get my Private Message?

bump, what do i have to do to get some votes ya'll, tell me

Ya'll need some votes huh? well I have to go with my man Horus(thetruth) fasho, he took that to the bank and cashed it..

Votes please

V/Horus

T Bo, ya verse was off in all ways. no punches, no solid stucture ect. Horus got my vote because he threw way more punches. My favorite line was "just follow the game, or get roasted/
or get hit with baseball bats, splittin your bones like Osteoporosis/"

exactly, every bar or two was a punch so i gotta go with Horus too.
i liked:
I "burn more trees than forst fires" that's amazing....