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mjust23~vs~-finy-
rulz
10-15 lines no crew do dr check in verses due in 25 min. u spit first |
were u at finy....................................
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Check
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You Couldn't •GRASP MY MIND• If You Tried Frisking My Head..|| Dis-arm mjust23 And Leave Him •HOLDING HIS HANDS• Like Christian Children Before Bed..|| You Thought You'd Win mjust23? But Fin Always Endure Duels, While I Deplore Fools..|| Fin's Strong Like Bulls, Having mjust •Praying For Delay• Like Snow Dropping Before School..|| Riding Jordan's Dick!! Is It True? You Love •Da Wood• Like It Says In Your Location..| I Get A Gore Sensation From Making You •Run Earth• Now Your Track Can Score Rotation..| .....Earth-Rotates And Track=Run....... Ya Wack And The Site Don't Like You So You Should Of Left!! Ill Have Ya Nose •BURNING• Like Sniffin Meth..| Watch mjust Bars Swept, Cuz Finy •BREAK IN YOUR FOCUS• like Attemptin Car Theft..| |
...Your Up Dawg, Drop Your Verus ...
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ur a fag, if i even say the word dic u pucker//
i mean, r u blind? can u even see your structure// cant believe ma flow, so sick u might hurl// u treat guys like kobe would treat a white girl// i got more punches and multies than u do dildos// ya moms put your hands on her balls and sayed feel those// the only u could win is if u dickride till your ass is sore// to u thats enjoyment, u gladly ask for more// your flow is wack, u couldnt elevate wit the gravity of mars// i'll spit on da mic and wen im done leave u wit sars// dis battle will leave u homeless, strugglin cop bottles// this cats pussy, am i battlen a guy or one of Americas Next Top Models. :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: |
lol damn
mjust23 ya shyt mad me laught son it had some hot personals and i was really enjoying your verse... punchlines were tight... multies were there and were good...structure was ALot better then finy.. and overall you really merked this newb....and your flow was good but ive seen you do alot better..... finy: holy shyt your verse was wack ass fuk man your structure was way off like always and you really need to learn how to make sense... multies were lame..punchlines were really off and i wasnt feeling it ... overall your verse was pretty lame and wack and this is why i gotta give this one to mjust23 Vote=mjust23 please return the favor in the battle in my sig thankz |
lmfao finy- dude whatsup your structure was terrible, most of the shit you spitted didnt even make sence, it was choppy
on the other hand mjust23 you had some strong punches that made me laugh the structure was alot better and you made it were finy- didnt stand a chance |
spitted didnt even make sence?
Sp You Did Not Understand It, So Your Vote Dont Count |
mjust u had some strong punches, and nice flow..finy ur flow wasnt so good and ur punches didnt hit hard..
v/mjust |
mjust23 won this because of his really good punches that seemed to hit harder the most. I liked his good punches, there was some nice word play from him, flowed pretty well altogether and had some good personals in der 2 which i also liked. The other one lacked a bit compared and thats why he just beat you on his punches, good battle though.
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yea i gotta see dis... finy u gotta work on ya structure and explain ya punches (sum peepl r a lil slow) but i got em. urz wasnt reel reel personal but mjust took this. he came wit better flo n both ya need better vocab. since mjust uses the same structure as me i felt his flow more.
v/mjust23 |
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