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C.March 06-24-04 02:35 AM

-White Powder(II) vs. E-Dubz(Maf)-
 
This Is A Crew Battle

RULES -

10 LINES MAX.. more = DQ
No Crew Votes = Obviously
No Hate Votes
No Dickriding Votes
No Feeding
Must Check In
Verses Due 40 Minutes After Check-In



Good Luck

C.March 06-24-04 02:36 AM

One More Bit Of Info.. 200 posts to vote on this battle, as it removes all of the herb votes..

e-dubz 06-24-04 11:09 AM

checkin in

L.E 06-24-04 11:21 AM

A'ight White Powder is checkin' in...he just doesnt want to wait for 3 hours to drop his verse. So White Powder...checky checky...

Recluse 06-24-04 11:22 AM

^lol

L.E 06-24-04 11:30 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by TRIGGA MATRIX
^lol


FREEPOST DRIVE BY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH HHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :shoot: :shoot:

L.E 06-24-04 11:41 AM

A'ight...good luck to tha both of you...this is a crew battle so NO FUCKING CREW VOTES.

e-dubz 06-24-04 11:43 AM

i'll smack ya neck wit gat and teks im not even into guns i just have the heat
you have to step how you a rap worlds 'vet' and i have yet to see you put a 'cat-to-sleep'
your heart gets killed as i knaw and peel away from it and since im here to stay
thats part of the deal you so far from ill if you sneezed it’d probably cure my aids
im used to hurtin reps i make a mean-verse only to lyrically shread this asshole
and when it comes to it i would say i’ve seen-worst but i never read yo battles
i mean i know somewhere inside yo body you got potential but i just cant call it
cuz yo flow is like unused notebook paper thats been thrown away its just plain garbage
im comin to splerge ya while hummin the burner point at yo face and split you in two
he’s runnin from murder i’ll son him no further cuz my child supports like his loss record, thru the roof

C.March 06-24-04 11:47 AM

Kid thinks hes sick but his audio wont sell, cus hes only “ill on a dell”*!
Everyone can tell, the only chance this kids got is if they found a frozen hell
Yo your always comin in second.. check out the crew listings.. II is above you!
After merkin this cat ima have him gettin his name changed more then Mental Anew*
This fag can’t afford real rims cause his rap is crap.... he only rolls on his E-Dubz*
Email is da only way ya send wack punchlines, jus anotha trait of these gay E-Thugs
Poppin Open a “coke bottle” is the only time this fuckin net thug “busts caps
You need to quit freestyling, cause you ain’t gonna make shit from your wack raps
Occupation? I think you need one.. cause your raps ain’t gonna get you anywhere
How’s this thug supposed to battle me and win?? Herb can’t even beat solitaire*
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EXPLANATIONS
* "Ill on a Dell" = Illadel PA is where he lives
* Mental Anew = He has had several name changes.. Terror.. Unholy.. etc.
* E-Dubz line = Dubs are 22 inch rims, and E-Dubz is a net thug joke...
* Solitare = Computer game.. Used the line as a net thug joke..

C.March 06-24-04 11:50 AM

Aight Uppin This For Votes

DeLeon 06-24-04 12:14 PM

E-Dubz

i'll smack ya neck wit gat and teks im not even into guns i just have the heat
you have to step how you a rap worlds 'vet' and i have yet to see you put a 'cat-to-sleep'
Gay...dont use lines like this playa
your heart gets killed as i knaw and peel away from it and since im here to stay
thats part of the deal you so far from ill if you sneezed it’d probably cure my aids
O-K.........
im used to hurtin reps i make a mean-verse only to lyrically shread this asshole
and when it comes to it i would say i’ve seen-worst but i never read yo battles
aight...
i mean i know somewhere inside yo body you got potential but i just cant call it
cuz yo flow is like unused notebook paper thats been thrown away its just plain garbage
a little better
im comin to splerge ya while hummin the burner point at yo face and split you in two
he’s runnin from murder i’ll son him no further cuz my child supports like his loss record, thru the roof
ha ha....NO!

aight...you didnt come hard at all....no personals....i wasnt feelin your verse
your punches were weak.....learn to hit harder and USE personals

overall:5.0/10

White Powder

Kid thinks hes sick but his audio wont sell, cus hes only “ill on a dell”*!
Everyone can tell, the only chance this kids got is if they found a frozen hell
ha ha.....this is a punch
Yo your always comin in second.. check out the crew listings.. II is above you!
After merkin this cat ima have him gettin his name changed more then Mental Anew*
aight.....
This fag can’t afford real rims cause his rap is crap.... he only rolls on his E-Dubz*
Email is da only way ya send wack punchlines, jus anotha trait of these gay E-Thugs
ha ha...good
Poppin Open a “coke bottle” is the only time this fuckin net thug “busts caps”
You need to quit freestyling, cause you ain’t gonna make shit from your wack raps
ok...
Occupation? I think you need one.. cause your raps ain’t gonna get you anywhere
How’s this thug supposed to battle me and win?? Herb can’t even beat solitaire*
ha ha...nice closer

you came harder with your verse...i clear punches...used some personals
overall a good drop....you could of done better...but you still got the merk


overall:7.0/10


Vote: White Powder

Wicked One 06-24-04 12:29 PM

Whoa One Sided...
E-Dubz- Your verse was decent but really didnt have a flow to it i didnt feel it ya know. Yo punches were okay but some just didnt hit hard and stuff. Some of your lines didnt kinda make sense. And you didnt even have any personals. Really you need some to have a better battle. So overall elevate more manye...
4/10

White powder- Your verse i liked it was feelin it . It had a little flow wit it. Yo punches hit hard . and they were way better then E-Dubz. U had some personals . And overall you get the win for better verse and punches....But you dindt seemto come hard like you often do ...but you did good for the win .....
7.5/10

v/White Powder

shadow 06-24-04 01:00 PM

e dubzzzz
i'll smack ya neck wit gat and teks im not even into guns i just have the heat
you have to step how you a rap worlds 'vet' and i have yet to see you put a 'cat-to-sleep'
ITS A MIX OF SELF GLORIFICATION... AND THEN... BAD STRUCTURE PUNCH DIDNT HIT HARD..4/10
your heart gets killed as i knaw and peel away from it and since im here to stay
thats part of the deal you so far from ill if you sneezed it’d probably cure my aids
FAIR LINE NOT GOOD ENOUHG THOUGH 6/10
im used to hurtin reps i make a mean-verse only to lyrically shread this asshole
and when it comes to it i would say i’ve seen-worst but i never read yo battles
NOT GOOD RHYME...THROW PUNCHES NOT SELF GLOR... 5/10
i mean i know somewhere inside yo body you got potential but i just cant call it
cuz yo flow is like unused notebook paper thats been thrown away its just plain garbage
OK OK THIS WAS FAIR..NEEDZ WORK THOUGH DUBZ 6/10
im comin to splerge ya while hummin the burner point at yo face and split you in two
he’s runnin from murder i’ll son him no further cuz my child supports like his loss record, thru the roof
WORSTLINE.. WACK PUNCH TERRIBLE CLOZER KEEP WORKIN.. 3/10 TOTAL=24/40

WHITEY POWDER...
Kid thinks hes sick but his audio wont sell, cus hes only “ill on a dell”*!
Everyone can tell, the only chance this kids got is if they found a frozen hell
NOT GOOD NOT BAD... COULD HAVE USED WORDPLAY A LIL BETTER 6/10
Yo your always comin in second.. check out the crew listings.. II is above you!
After merkin this cat ima have him gettin his name changed more then Mental Anew*
FAIR PUNCH LOL NICE PUNCH ACTUIALLY 8/10
This fag can’t afford real rims cause his rap is crap.... he only rolls on his E-Dubz*
Email is da only way ya send wack punchlines, jus anotha trait of these gay E-Thugs
NICE!! USE GOOD WORDPLAY 7/10
Poppin Open a “coke bottle” is the only time this fuckin net thug “busts caps”
You need to quit freestyling, cause you ain’t gonna make shit from your wack raps
GOOD A LIL PLAYED BUT GOOD 7/10
Occupation? I think you need one.. cause your raps ain’t gonna get you anywhere
How’s this thug supposed to battle me and win?? Herb can’t even beat solitaire*
NICE THIS WAS A GOOD ENDER 9/10 TOTAL 37/50
WHITE POWDER U WON THIS BATTLE EASILY... ONE SIDED
EDUBZ.. U DIDN NOT REPRESENT YA CREW AT ALL
AND IF ALL UR CREW BATTLES THIS BAD.. UR IN TROUBLE!

PoLiFicK 06-24-04 01:11 PM

White powder merked dis with ease

Kid thinks hes sick but his audio wont sell, cus hes only “ill on a dell”*!
Everyone can tell, the only chance this kids got is if they found a frozen hell
Yo your always comin in second.. check out the crew listings.. II is above you!
After merkin this cat ima have him gettin his name changed more then Mental Anew*
This fag can’t afford real rims cause his rap is crap.... he only rolls on his E-Dubz*
Email is da only way ya send wack punchlines, jus anotha trait of these gay E-Thugs
Poppin Open a “coke bottle” is the only time this fuckin net thug “busts caps”
You need to quit freestyling, cause you ain’t gonna make shit from your wack raps
Occupation? I think you need one.. cause your raps ain’t gonna get you anywhere
How’s this thug supposed to battle me and win?? Herb can’t even beat solitaire*


verse was sick

punches was on target vocab was nice and personals was tight

9/10

E ok verse stretched tho

i'll smack ya neck wit gat and teks im not even into guns i just have the heat
you have to step how you a rap worlds 'vet' and i have yet to see you put a 'cat-to-sleep'
your heart gets killed as i knaw and peel away from it and since im here to stay
thats part of the deal you so far from ill if you sneezed it’d probably cure my aids
im used to hurtin reps i make a mean-verse only to lyrically shread this asshole
and when it comes to it i would say i’ve seen-worst but i never read yo battles
i mean i know somewhere inside yo body you got potential but i just cant call it
cuz yo flow is like unused notebook paper thats been thrown away its just plain garbage
im comin to splerge ya while hummin the burner point at yo face and split you in two
he’s runnin from murder i’ll son him no further cuz my child supports like his loss record, thru the roof


Verse gets a 7/10

winner-white

SPuL™ 06-24-04 01:54 PM

yea, White got this one wit ease. Ok, battle, though

E, ok verse. But you could have came harder, man. Your punches were aiight, but none really hit that hard. Your flow was a little off,t hough. overall it was an ok verse.

White, good verse. You had some nice hard hittin' punches. I liked your flow too. It was really good. Good job wit this verse. You did very well. Overall, it was tight.You ghet this

v/White


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