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ILL Tempa vs. Atticus
Rulez:
10-16 lines. No crew,hate, d/r, etc. Check in A.S.A.P. Verses due 30 min. Afta check in. |
Ayo This Is A Check...
But Make The Lines Lims Lower... 8-14... Cuz I Got Other Battles Pending So I Needa Have Something Left Na Mean... Lol, But Ya I'm Here... ~One~ |
Who's spittin first?
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You're Better So You Can Go First...
dsfdddddddasdddddddddddfadfdasdfaddddddddddggggggg gasdg |
iight check in............Have my verse in 20 min.
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Aiight Mayn...
I'll Have Mine Down Soon After... ~One~ |
I'm 2 and 0 wit 2 KO's, so you betta bring all yo weapons//
This nigga wanted me to spit first, cuz he's used to sloppy seconds// I keep it 10-16 lines, cuz my shit is short -n- sweet// Your like a legless track runner, you just can't compete// I open my mind, find tha rhymes, and let him have it// It looks like he stood behind a screen door and some1 threw shit at it// His parents offered me money to find him cuz he got kidnapped// I found this chump in "Textual Territory", gettin "Bitch Slapped"// This nigga got a set of "Dentures" made just for "Biting"// But he's still no good, like a cake without tha icing// Ya "Breath" stays "Hot" so when you "Spit Lyrics" they "Reek"// He's so dumb he takes a "Ruler" to bed to see how "Long" he sleeps// U got 40 posts and no record, garbage history// This battles over, I win, by Flawless Victory. |
ur up....................Good Luck kid.
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Where you at. You was supposed to post a long ass time ago. And u alrady checked in. You only had 30 min. but i'm gun wait for ya.
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Ayo Mayn, Sorry About This...
Like 10 Minuts After You PMed Me And We Sorted Ish Out I Gota Call And Had To Bounce... I'll Still Spit If Your Chill Widdit Though |
Ayo Sry It Took So Long...
Shit Came Up The Other Day... And Props Mayn, Thats A Tite Verse... Good Luck... ~One~ Homie Couldn't Be-TEMPERED If He Needed-To-Blacksmith!... And ILL?, Not Even When He's-Tethered To His TEMPA-pedic-Matress//1 I'LL Up The TEMPA-ture When My Lines-CEL-YA-THIS-Art...(CELYATHIS/CELCIUS) And Send-Ya-Verse Into ORBIT So You Can Say Your High-In-The-Charts//2 And He Says I SPIT-After Cuz I Love Them-Sweet-N'-Sloppy... But This-BASTEREDs Been On My -STEM- Like His Meters'-Used-Unproperly//3 (Regular METER And Rhythem,Goes On The End Or Beging) Daym And Just-Look At All Of Your -Punches-... Never Mind Jokes, Just-Look, It's Sad I Gota Show You What You Should Come-With//4 Says He Can RUN CIRLCLES Around-Me, But Not Even With Geometric-Math-Tools... Cuz He Has No FOOTING Around-Me Like A Leggless-Track-Crew//5 Tryn Be-Defiant By Sayin I'll Do 10-16 Instead Of Within-Those-Asked-For-By-Me... But He's-Lying About Not Listenen-See,Cuz Just Then-He-Didn't-Go-Past-Line-14!//6 |
i have 2 say ill tempa got my vote cuz he had betta punchlines, originality, structure, & his flow was on point but atticus u have a ok flow but u need 2 elevate it a lil bit mo
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first off the batt, atticus he already had that legless track runner thang in there... you prolly shoulda used somethin else... it was a nice bar, but still thats kinda feeding..
atticus ur verse really didnt have ne flow at all... your punches were like sentences, you need to chop that shit down a smidgen or focus on matching sylables or somethin :P... ill tempa i felt like your punches were real simple typed ones.. but i liked that ruler one, even tho it was a joke before it was a punch :P.. i believe atticus got this due to his punches... they hit a bit harder.. except for that fed line :P, that almost lost my decision lol.. v/Atticus |
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uppin fo votes.................
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