Da Jokah Vs Bone Killah
 

aight chek da rulez home boi

5 to 30 lines
no bite /recyclin
no hate crew or d.r votes
U SPIT FIRST
due by 8 pm sharp tonite
lets do this e.z nigga wun...

checkin in nigga wun......

ight checkin in, i'll post up in a bit son.

-0n1-

Both yall suck. Ill take both of yall in a double team.

get da fuck outta hear....

you couldnt digest the compressed flows uppin through your chest//
from the blood test we ran from your request we discovered that u need 2 unjust ur vest//
you got it to tite n hyped up your ass//
no wonder your white n from the trailor homes trash//4
from the spits shit to the quick grip off ur fist i beat this joker//
i took my dick off ur womans lips and bought you 2 a new marriage broker//
after that ressuply you still deny to imply that you never came onto me//
your a faggot who never could bag it wearin ty die shirts but still pretend to be the best MC//9
i'll whoop ur ass over and over again//
this white trash was victimized and posted up lost all over CNN//
They went on a search mission but found nothin but your psyriosis skin condition//
so there ambition was get greater competition cuz to beat me you'll need your own coalition//
i'll take ur blood and make it spread with my flow//
you'll be eatin out like a bitch by a pervert on ur death bed like a homo//15
blood starts off blue but urs turned dark red//
ur face got purple and i captured you large head//
we got ur results of 1000 volts through your MRI//
heres this kid thinkin he can get an easy win from a rookie//
Well heres your GOOD-BYE//20

first flow off the site.

-0n10

ayo chek it

First off yur just another bitch that gon get fucked up//
Under tha influence of drugs u gettin stucked up//
Caps blastin at cha facial features..ready for a make over//
Killin niggas in war time..ma niggas yellin..ready for take over//
have u like harlem..and get u all shakin and stirred//
Bill gates worth bills.. so we takin that nerd//
On top of spegetti ill have ya face like reggu//
New to tha game..u gotta leave soon i beg u//
Elderly ppl in ma hood crazy to they'll snag u//
turn to tha Klux style..tie u up to ma bumbah and drag u//
Killa crab none stop and iam a keep poppin//
I love i wen i make a trak and niggas like u coppin//
Lately ive been getitn standn obations..well u be droppin//
Lime is sour like ya lines...leave ya face all sqwished//
All-star nigga have u like a fuckin light and have u switched//
after that nigga ill have u like a frozen video game and leave u glitched//
nuh fuckaH tlakin bout hoe u da wun who i be leavin bitched//

e.z nigga wun ,muh fuckah...

uppin this muh fuckah donnt sleep niggas ..e.z wun.....

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This battle was one sided...

The other Cat His lines where too many multis n not enough punches it was so broad, the one line that stood out was the colation along with the pervert joke but not enough to stand alone..

The way it compromised Fuck You n stuck together was well done, the structure speaks for itself along with the punches..


Overall: Da Jokah, peace..

uhhhhh... battle was ok.... but neither one you really was throwin punches... you kind of jsut talked about what you gon do to the opponent... and bone you really was spitting some random shit =/.. like it was more of a cypher tpye verse thena battle verse.. and because of that, i think jokah won.... i suggest both of you take a look at the tutorials that the moderators put down in help section of this forum.. might do you guys a bit of a good.. not trying to sound harsh or mean at all.....

v/jokah

jokah merked dis nigga..better punches, flow and structure..bone elevate and get harder hittin punches..

jokah got this battle but it was pretty close i only seen a couple of punches thrown but they landed it seems as if bone was just spittin multis and nothin else elevate

vote-jokah

damn this was a tight battle but damn arrest got merked
da joka
was an iight verse... multies were iight but ive seen alot better from you....punchlines were iight but ive seena lot better.........they were enought to merk bone kila....
personals were iight but ive seen alot better....structure was alot better then bone killa and that is why you won...


bone killa
you had an lame as fuk verse.....structure was way off but you really need to stop with // and shyt to end your lines that really getting played...mutlies were wack and pretty lame... personals well i think werent any....punchlines were str8 but da jokah had alot more.. and that is the reason why you lost

Vote=da jokah
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