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Lil-trip 06-24-04 11:15 PM

Lil trip vs J Dot
 
10 Lines Minimum
20 Lines Maximum
20-35 Minutes After "Both" have "Checked" in Spit is due
Both Start spittin at same time to ensure pressure on both same, Spittin starts after both checked in..

"Checked In"

M-Eazy 06-24-04 11:19 PM

checkin in...ready
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M-Eazy 06-24-04 11:29 PM

dawg, your a 'lil trip', thats my first line/
your 4-18, i think your waistin your time/
your a sad case, thats the start of my second bar/
you got a losing record, and your asking for more/
but i'll give it up to you, you should never quit/
just keep battlin til u become real sick/
but u must be sick, to keep going past 18/
oh, shit, my bad, am i destroying yo battlin dreams?/
so da hell wut, cause me and you is no issue/
i took a wheenie poll, and found out u softer than tissue/
and now u coming at me with yo losing record, thats crazy/
sign under a different name, start over, you'll be ill, maybe/
just stop...take advice from J DOT, your not hot/
your no martin luther king with a dream to make it to the top/
your not on my level get your wieght up/
i'll overlap you twice before you ever get your cake up/
will i be a young 'waiter' if i 'served you beef'?/
just walk away now, at least you'll be on two feet/

Lil-trip 06-24-04 11:45 PM

aight....
 
Your a pussy n wit Pussy I only Hit "G-Spots" you only spit when you cough
Jdot couldnt handle holdin "Rocks" if he was the Janitor of a Highschool Lot
1989 NWA was Released this cat hopin he was somehow born the same week
You from Sacramento homeboi not Harlem 15 Year olds don Dish Defeat
I choose beef n am the First to back down when asked to Divide Hate
Cant handle "My-Weight" im over double your Posts bitch your a "FlyWeight"
Ima rate you Outta 5 wit your standard of rhymes your half of me at 2.5
Post count of 24.69 there no way this bitch has ever wrote a Real Rhyme
Faggats choose Jdot sayin "He'll Shop wit Me' n bite down my Cock for free
Im all over your Biography n its easy to see why Flyweights cant topple Me
Your a pussy whos "Lips" only spit when he drools Luda this cat "Acts a Fool"
I made the thread n I made the Rules I gradded this bitch is still in school
You a Fake Em whos mom chose a Lez n yet you come out as the bigger fem
Jdot couldnt design a thread if he used my Tongue on his pencil as lead
keepin this shit basic your body will be like yo Dad(s) Semen U cant trace it
Trips Matrix likin yo lines when its like your Mom in a Orgasm i have to Fake it

Lil-trip 06-25-04 12:03 AM

aight..
 
uppin for votes, lets get this shit closed so more can begin, holla back

infinite 06-25-04 10:57 AM

j dot man I thought you were really good man and neally everything in your punches hit harder the most and you had a wicked on your flow so dat basically killed da other guys shit. Good battle though really good shit wrote but gonna stick to my vote and dats jay dot man. Holla back j dot wanna talk to ya in a pm.

Lil-trip 06-25-04 05:04 PM

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aight uppin, lookin for votes holla back wit some honest love...

SparSin 07-06-04 09:14 PM

equal battle
 
ya both got a goob battle here.... lil trip ya shit was long, kinda lost me near the middle for a sec, but got back in it...
jdot i like it shot and sweet, nice punches but you keep bringin the same shit up over and over and over.... not tryin to hate...
lil trip i liked your word usage but i think ya flow could have been better
and this y im sayin its a hard battle to vote on
lil trip better punches, word usage
jdot better flow, quick, and straight to point...

but since i have to choose, punches be winnin battles...

V=Lil Trip... not tryin to hate j this a hard choice....

return the favor on my audio if yall could....

M-Eazy 08-08-04 02:54 PM

uppn this too...lets go peoples 2 min..well more than 2 min cause he wrote a book, but its worth it...return HONEST votes in yall battles

.TeamOne. 08-08-04 03:21 PM

yo this one definately goes to J. lil trips flow made absolutely no sense to me. he put his in a confusing style... but anyways, J dot's punces were way better... lil trip's attempts at punches were terrible... who talks about biting dicks? to me, it was ineffective.

M-Eazy 08-08-04 07:42 PM

^coo...thanx for da vote homie....upppppnnnnnnnnnnnnn this shit againn...peoples

M-Eazy 08-08-04 07:57 PM

upnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn b

Detrimental 08-08-04 08:22 PM

didn't like Lil Trips style...i was left confused....the flow lost me...you attempted punches but you missed every one...biting dicks and shit is played...WACK!!!!....you wordplay and mettas.....not that great....but ok...elevate man

J DOT....you could elevate a little too....you lost me for a sec when you used the same 4-18 diss....but you came back with decent punches and wordplay....nice structure....but overall you both can elevate...i enjoyed readin yours the most

V/J DOT
return the favor

M-Eazy 08-09-04 12:27 AM

upppppppppnnnnnnnnnnn

D-ICED 08-09-04 12:50 AM

j had better punches and metaphores and wayyyyyyy better struture.lil had some good hits too but your struture was fucked up and that ruined it for you'
v-j


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