e-dubz Vs thetruth#1
 

ok, you set the rules already let's go....

yo it needs to b a battle thread imma set it up..holla

nvm dawg..ma fault..checkin in

your a bitch and i swear, i'll expose you worse than the Clinton affair
cuz yo punches cant even be called misses, cuz they aint even hittin the air
yah punches, my bars avoid and breathe sick; i’ll turn yo sars to voids
cuz battlin me is going beyond yo image like women wanting to be barbie toys
ayo burst from the first heat have yo drippin red like yo thirst is full of slurpys
inverse number 30 and i'll put the odds against you like wearin reversible jerseys
im on top of the show, put a dam in yo mouth im straight stoppin yo flow
call me a clumsy gardener cuz this aint the last time ima be droppin this hoe
yo im winnin so best believe it..my status you cant achieve it
cuz im put a DISS to and end like a fuckin Peacefull Agreement

Check it,

I'll piss in your Flow and expose your careless verses/
i'll murder anyone named "edubz", just for stealing their name from Eric Sermon/
Swearin, cursing, slam your ugly face on a mirror, giving you bad luck/
yo, if you were a fuckin mathematician your style still wouldn't add up/
you get knocked out in freestyles, your competitions are hard to score/
You prolly couldn't even win a battle if you read the art of war/
by your record you really must be whack, apparently/
and iv'e read your rhymes, i wouldn't give them mugs to charity/
i'll mop the "flow" with you, your mouth is dirty like frisco's streets/
and you must have ice in your mouth, you can't spit no heat/
just peep the technique man, your flow is getting tossed up/
your now like my car out of the detail..... just all washed up/

aight dubz nice punches.good personals.u could tell this wasnt any prewrites i liked it. jus keep elevatin like uve been doin and battelin more and more its doin good uve gotten a lot better.the truth u need to work big time on persoanls and usin no fillers. ur flow was good and some of those punches were good but the quality was takin away cause of the fillers so jus work on shortening lines taking out fillers and usin at least 2 personals aight pc

v/dubz

What in the hell is a filler?

fillers r lines dat aint punches and serve only to take up lines

a yo close battle im gonna have to say e dubz this was one of ur best battles i have seen yet.. good punches i liked the dropping ho part... and yeah truth u had a hell of a lot of fillers soo my vote goes to edubz

yo return da favor on my battle vs. eyedentdy.

uppin

good close battle, u both had some good punches and multies, keep elevatin.
i liked this battle but ima have to say e-dubz is the winner, he cam a little harder.
good battle tho.

uppin

Vote man, i'm startin not to like this site, ya'll do not vote enough

Is anyone else gonna Vote on this

I don't know man, I think thetruth#1 barley took this one, when he said,

"i'll murder anyone named e-dubz just for stealing their name from eric sermon",

that killed it, it was a hard personal. E-dub is Eric Sermon's rap name and this kid stole it, all in all e-dubz had good punches, but none of them were as personal as that one..