LyRiKaL19 vs unfortunate
 

yo...
aight 10 lines spit...
i go first...
no crew...
no hate...
explaine votes...

holla

i got to handle some shit...b bak in like and hour

I KNOW BITCHES LIKE TO RUN THEIR MOUTH THATS WHY I PULL A BLADE AND THEN YOU ARE OUT//
YOU SAID YOUR FROM THA HOOD, WEREN'T YOU A BOY SCOUT? EARNED YOUR BADGES IN WHAT...HOW TO TALK EBONIXS
WHERE YO FROM HOMIE//BETTER TELL ME NOW// IF YOU CAN RUN MY LIFE BETTER//TELL ME HOW//CAUSE YOUR AS WELCOME AS WHITEY AT A POW WOW//
LIKE TO SEE YOU TRY ME NOW// I'VE MADE YOU BECOME A PART OF MY PAST//
THE GOOD DIE YOUNG BUT THE BAD SEE LYRICALL CAST WHEN I BLAST//U THINK U CAN LAST THEN COME ON HOMEBOY BLAST :shoot:

MUCH LUV YO...ITS BEEN A WHILE...

when this battle gets up and runnin, i'll vote on it. meanwhile can you vote on my battle, the link is in my sig.

he been gone so long, unfortunatley im bout to burn him like chek and chong
ill smoke you longer then a bong, beat you hard then a muslim beating a gong

you lieing to self lyrkial, those punches were so weak you need a marycle
like rhyming its unparable, crowds flock in bunches cause its so terrible

my punches mutalate the living, you can relate since im the one giving
try to compete i leave you spining,im undefeted and still goin on winning

i looked at your record its a relieve, he hasent even got a single vote i beleive
trying to win pulling shit yo sleeve, i beat this nigger so bad i just got to leave

im gifted by all of the gods, you talk some more shit ill kill you with metal rods
try asking the mods, il ship you out and mail you to a guy near the cape cods

that line were it says shit yo sleve is suppose to be shit out yo sleve

well were not open for votin so come in and vote or take some notes

yo uppin for some votes...and yo unfortunate...that wasnt even my best mayne...

lmfao this wasnt my best either your shit was wac so i took it easy though
no offense

unfortunate
was an iight verse... multies were iight but nothing was spetacular... punchlines were iight but not very good but they were enought to merk lyriak911....
personals were iight but ive seen alot better....structure was alot better then arrest and that is why you won...flow was pretty nice and it had it ups and downs but overall you won this battle

lyrikal 19
you had an iight verse but it was pretty weak at times... structure was way off but you really need to stop with // and shyt to end your lines that really getting played...mutlies were iight but pretty lame at times ... personals well i think werent any....punchlines were str8 but unfortunate had alot more.. and that is the reason why you lost

Vote=unfortunate
please return the favor in my sig thank you

So Weres All These Freestylerz In This Battle Forum Ive Been In Here For 2 Hours N Im Struck With Boredom,
Thought Id Just Pop In To Let This White Boy Show How Im Gon Make Lots Of Cash And Fuck A Latin Hoe!

yowe need votes so go vote now ill repay the favor by doing an honestr vote

break down

opener:un
punches:un
flow:both
strcuture:un
wordplay:none
personals:both
closer:un
overall:un

i'll poll after you vote on this http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=130196

yo trigga i voted honestly on you battle now vote here oh yea and everyone else vote to

uppin for votes in this bitch...and u have to explain them or else they dont count...lets get this closed...