Economics vs bcdynamic
 

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check this out....yo.....Bitch living his life using lies…he’s 18 when he’s born in 1988//
Kid can’t even count…probably reading milk carton to educate//
The cat’s feeling nervous…obviously never battled a business man*//
I use my economic diploma…here, let me wipe off those sweat glands //
I’m just way better…your rhymes are like written a fucking Chinese rapper//
Boasting that you’re in a crew…wackest cat in his cipher//
Thinking you’re so sick…your claiming days are just over//
Make this cat shit on himself…telling your mommy yeah I already fucked her//
Slap this bitch and blast him into the middle of cyber space//
Bitch you’re not welcome, you’re a disgrace to the human race//

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lyrical assault
 

yo economics ya style is straight going down the drain/
like george bush was controllin yu and im talkin bout the economy/
but wat i got yu lack this this guy got the wackness ya rymes is like a derailed train dawg they trackless/
yu dont get no gulz dawg yu mackless/
yu jus wack yu need to go to the back of the emcee line/
but battlin yu im wastin my time//
yo due my rap style one of a kind/
this dues rymes is chewable but i spitem up/
so ima do like pac did biggie ima hitem up/
this guys name shouldnt be called economics/
he should be called mister shitty/
cause this guys styles more dingy than bad bitty/
off the pootie tang/
due fuckin wit me ........he'll neva hang/

vote peeps
 

come on vote peeps yall got to vote aight jus vote

aight people let's get some of them votes into this battle, and i want them explained and honest

iight iight this battle was pretty one sided and i gotta give this one to economics...

economics
your verse pretty tight...but ive seen you do alot better at times..personals were decent and were making there mark..punchlines were good and were really hitten...flow was good and it was at a steadty pass...overall i gotta give this battle to you nice battle and you won

bcdynamic..
damn you keep impressing me you really changed alot and thats a good thing you dont do those paragraphs no more.. and i really like that..punchlines were decent but they were really weak at times...personals also weak...multies...again weak...
overall your verse was weak but you really improvable..

vote=economics
please return the favor in my sig thank you

yeah ima go wit econmics on this one his punches were hitin harder but the other guy's were aight improvein fa sho flow goes to eco vocab goes to eco humor goes to niether yo i voted here eco go drop a vote on my battle wit this guy and my battle wit andu09 pc

Economics
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow fell off a lil because of the stretched lines...u had some metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...personals were pretty good...

bcdynamic
structure was wack...ur lines started out stretched as hell, then u took them to where they were to simple...flow fell off a lot because ur structure was so wack...no metas...wordplay is ok...a few of ur punches connected...attempted personal, didnt connect...

Overall
Economics had the better structure...the better flow...more metas...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals...so basing off of that...he gets my vote...

VOTE - ECONOMICS

PLEASE return the favor on one of the links in my sig...thanx a lot man...

this was a good battle yall close to each otha i had to reread these verses to really vote but i had to give it to economics becuz his punches were harder and made more sence bcdynamic came off too plain in his flow both can elevate and expand vocab holla

vote-economics

thanks for the votes yo, uppin for more votes........

flows:dcdynamic
vocab:economics
punches:economics
personalls:economics
overall:economics