Mag... vs Marvelis
 

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yo yo this kid need jesus
this kid forgot he's battling da marvelis one
i'm bringing the big toys and the boys
when you come through you better be ready for war
settle the score
leave your head on the floor
i'm the america's most wanted
i'm like the D.C sniper
pickin this nigga like i'm picking my shoes
your walkin around like it;s the time of the season
is it a reasen for you to be breathen
i'm leaving you on resperating
i let my doggs eat you later
all right it's a wrap 1

[QUOTE=Marvelis]yo yo this kid need jesus
this kid forgot he's battling da marvelis one
i'm bringing the big toys and the boys
when you come through you better be ready for war
settle the score
leave your head on the floor
i'm the america's most wanted
i'm like the D.C sniper
pickin this nigga like i'm picking my shoes
next time i'm goin to beat this kid like he's my slave

my b the first one is it the last one is a fuck up ok my bad

w/e son its all good can we get some votes on this please

uppin again please we need some votes will return the favor

Mag got this one totally by like a mile, he had a better structure and harder hitting punches, and nice personals:
Now the stage-has-flipped, Im firing bullets that'll graze-ya-lips...
M's ass has been pounded so many times, he has to "GLAZE-HIS-SHIT!"...
He's used to getting beat, that why he he "CRAVES-the-WHIP"...
At his job at "Chip and Dales" they make HIM "PAY-TO-STRIP!"...

the above are just some of nice punches by mag

Marvelis's verse was terrible! it doesn't even rhyme! horrible structure and flow, that's the end of that, no hate here, but you can't compare marvelis's verse with mag..'s

vote: Mag..

Marvelis
structure was simple as hell...flow fell off a little...a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Mag..
structure was ok...some of the lines seemed stretched though...flow fell off a lil due the stretchness...metas were tight...wordplay was tight...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...neither had a stable flow...mag had the better structure...mag had more, and better metas...as well as wordplay...mag also had more connecting punches...so basing off of that..mag gets my vote...

VOTE - MAG...

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Yo 4 real Mag just unleashed, i like his flow and shit, hes gotta watch his lines though, some of them went a little long but other than that it was a slaughter, his lyrics were deep as fuck.....holla and vote on my battles to bro help a nigga out

yo this battle was close but id give this one to mag becuz his punches toward tha end hit hard but mag u started off shaky i thought marvelis had u and that wouldve been sad dun but tha last three bars got u my vote marvelis u need to check out tha tutorials for real read a couple of em and elevate befo u battle sum one like mag holla

vote-mag

mag killed this one, marvelous was ritin lines that was too short and some parts of it didnt make sense. marvelous, u aint too bad, but mag got this. his lines were more complex and i understood em all.

my vote goes to mag


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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131672