SiccWitIt vs D2d onE
 

ten lines max !
you decide who spits first
must post verse 25 minutes after first verse is posted !
all other rules apply good luck!
you need to check in here and state who you want to go first peace!

aright this is SiccWitIt, u can go first bro, i dont know how to check in but fuck it

Drop ur shit DOgg, im readdy to murder somebody, sicc wit the gift bitch

Where u at???????????????????????????????????????????????? ?///

iight .............
 

geez guy all your hyper actions seem to be getting me dizzy feeling mad HIGH//
like in lethal weapon you be a hooker spun steeping off the ledge just see if u Can FLY//
after falling 20 stories trying fly , you realize you can’t and you die//
reality here on earth just proves what you are worth ,just a diverse perv wearing a purse //
ignorantly stepping into your death~ now your left laying back riding to your funeral in hurse //
you say your sic wit it , more like simplistic I’ll eat your ass up so cannibalistic//
thought you where a wiz kid , but realizing your futureless in this hip hop business//
it’s relentless how I endlessly devour spitting flame like Mario after eating a magical flower//
intense power written under a half an hour//
with more devastation than the destruction of the twin towers//

it's 11:00pm pacific time g ............... you got 25 minutes !!!!

11:21 pm pacifc time !!????? your time is running up !!! what are you going to do ??

Arighhht
 

O my god dog its about time u got to work//
I was wondering when i would get a good reason for ur ass to get merked//
But hold up ho, it looks like you've been studying the dictionary//
I can read my rhymes of the back of a cereal box and still kill u,Fairy//
Shit if thats not legit that i dont know what it is//
Ur ass is a fuckn dreamer if u think this shits gonna promote u to the music bizz//
And now u wanna get canabalistic,if eatin ur gurls pussy is count, then ive already been in this shit//
I make ur mind go blurry and off task//
My lines is simple and not confusin and i smoked u like a pound of Grass// :shoot: :shoot:

dam you almost lost on default g !!! thanx for posting good luck it's all out of or hands and in the hands of the readers peace!

my bad , i didnt relize the time and had to rush the shit, ur shit was good though, ill give u that

D2d onE
structure was fucked...shrink ur lines man...there way stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness...u had some nice metas...wordplay was pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

SiccWitIt
structure was wack...ur lines were all over the place...even them shits out man...flow fell off, as some of ur lines were short as hell, and some were really stretched...u had a few metas...worplay was decent...a few of ur punches connected....no good personals...

Overall
neither had a good structure...neither had a good flow...neither had good personals...both had decent wordplay...D2d onE had more metas...as well as more connecting punches...so basing off of that...he gets my vote...

VOTE - D2D ONE

PLEASE return the favor on one of the links in my sig...thanx man...

uppin for feed back plus votes ! tanks for the feed back plus votes when i get enough post i will stat voteing peace!

upp9in because this xite is showing no love !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

d2d wins this...

siccwitit this must be one of ur weakest battle.. ive seen better from u

d2d had ok punches but better than sicc's

v/d2d

hit up my sig plz

Yeah this battle was pretty lop-sided... d2d had better punches, it wasn't as choppy, the vocab used was even more advanced... Both of ur structures were imperfect, but d2d's was at least consistent... d2d didn't come too hard, but its like sicc didn't come at all... Vote d2d. - please return the favor http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305