this is the 1 verse to my 2nd song yo i want feedback yall
 

my rymes is water and demons are the fire and my team iz goonna win/
gospel nation/
the new rap empire/
and jesus is the sire/
im like kanye spittin through the wire/
if yu think yu betta than me yus a liar/
cause im the one the writer/
the one wit the serious flow/
thats gon be like whoa on ya radio/
neva smoke dro/
but ya dont hear me doe/
so here i go im not goin against i am the grain/
bringin the lyrical pain to ya brain like method main/
im not simple in plain/
i gotta reach like a crane for that top spot/
cause im the one that brung the non-cuss flows to all yo does/
cause the verbal is so large/
its gon put me in charge/
like marge simpson/
yull neva see me pimpin/
cause that a me b.c from leach d/
so when people hear me they gon be like wow/
and i aint gon throw in the towel

Think this is the audio forum dog :nono:

nigga u suck