SiccWitIt vs. DoubleEdge
 

Yo,

Check in, you spit first.
5 bars minimum, 10 bars max
no recyclin, bitin, hate votes, etc.
I think thas all...

Good luck, Peace.

aright.......here i go

This Bitch thinks his ass is doubleEdged,Im sure after this he'll want2 throw me off the edge//
Im like a Hacksaw bitch, feel my sirated rymes//
I cut through ur skillz like wood , some say im jesus , but i aint kind//
U must of really wanted to get ebarrassed on this site//
U should of let ur bitch right for ya after she get off them corners tonight//
O wait my bad thats ya mom's,fuck it ill tap that stinker until up comes dawn//
Then i gotta slide my shades on and Bounce//
Ur probably can operate ur junk thats Y u buyin Viagra by the ounce(ooo)//
So what up dude what cha gonna hit me with//
Ill cut you up and roll u tight and then Blaze u like Spliff...Bitch///

you soon to resemble a toilet, all pissed n shit/
'cause you fire rounds n still miss with hits/*
pissed I'm lit, I'm above when you fakin spits/
I'm passin 'dope slugs', an you affraid to take a 'hit'/
even for ya bitch, hey yo, now thas jus cold/
only time you goin straight, is when you passin up hoe's/
pubic hair, wasn't fair, 'cause you was tha last to grow/
ya punches don't hit even with a boxin mit attatched to flow/
fantasy braincancer, the way you thinkin you 'sicc' in the dome/
bitch, you couldn't be OFF THE HOOK, if you picked up the phone!/ :laugh:

Peace

just put 10 lines, cause i didnt see that 15 was cool until later , if u get this late then 15 is cool i guess...

*at the end of call out post, had a smilie shootin an AK at nothin

Good luck, homes, ready for votes!!

uppppppppppppin...................................

Peace

WTF, is like every battle of mine rigged so no one will vote???!!!

Uppin. Yo peeps, wtf??? how many battles I gotta vote on to NOT get slept on???

opener: both
structure:double edge
punches: sicc
personals: both
closer:sic
vote: sicc I'll vote on the poll wen i get 20 post and that will be soon return the favor at Judge. vs D2d onE

siccwitit your verse was pretty weak...bars were stretched and forced...w/p wasnt hott hardly any multies...punches were mediocre and the flow was inconsistent you need to elevate alot...you had some played lines and some really weak lines nothing was interesting in your verse

overall:2/10

doubleedge you probably won this batle with just your opener it was kinda basic but still decent and a good punch your verse was consistent and had a nice flow structure was nice...you had a couple good multies...vocab is bad need to elevate on that...wordplay was decent once again pretty basic...and your closer was played...

overall: 6/10

vote:doubleedge

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131933 heres the link

siccwitit, your opener was a bit weak, that shit about his mom was a good idea, but it didnt rhyme that well. blaze you like a spliff, i hear that line every time im at battles in real life dog, but if it works it works.

double's rhymes was better, there was one or 2 lines when i didnt no what ya was talkin bout, but that happens to all of us more on the net cuz ya cant play up 2 a crowd. the fone off the hook line was pretty good too. ima give this vote to double edge simply cuz his lyrics seemed better.

Vote= double edge.

Double Edge took this one... he had more wordplay and a couple of ok punches, somewhat played, but still came better than Sicc

Sicc just work on punching, fuck rhyming and multi's, anyone can do that. Rhyming ain't hard, it when you apply wittiness and punches AND rhyme that it hits... but good effort

Double keep elevatin, I liked how you came with a few concepts (they're a little played, but hey you're learning) and keep it up, in no time you'll be a force to be reckoned with... just remember if it was easy to think up, it's probably been done... better. So always come with something you haven't heard or read before, and then it will hit harder. pz

vote - Edge

double edge had more hard hitting punches,
his was cleverly worked and the flow was better,
pretty close though overall but he took this one...
vote- double edge!!

OK sicwitit ur verse sucked cock, no disrespect, everythin was stretched and forced. The only good line sort of was bar 4.

Doubleedge ur not to good either but u had flow and u had a couple of decent punches.

Flow-Double
Punches-Double
Mulities-None
Complexity-Double
Overall-Double

Sic, u gotta let ur rhymes flow cuz.


I voted on this one can u vote in my battle in my sig.