.The Deuce. Vs. A.K.A.
 

ok you no the rules you spit first and i'll finish your ass. :shoot:

ok check in you asshole. i'm ready to battle after you spit. (i can't believe this cat thinks he can beat me lol thats really funny)

checkin in ill spit soon..........................

yo


ima slice this bitch to pieces, my knifes lyrically scraping your wrists/
i own your crew, my goverment, ill merk you all, thats how it twists//
Banned: too worthless to be worhty at rapbattle relaunched/
im stoppin ur flow like the best rappers flow being staunched//
Actually Known As, the worst emcee, hes guilty to plead/
i got this bitch on lockdown, still suckin on his mom titties for breast-feed//
M'Just finish this bitch of with just a couple of punches/
Unfortunaltly, im chompin this kid down, a fat kid with a couple of crunches// (of food)
My Raps are SiccWitIt, i can flip and rip any style you want/
This is an upset, me beatin u like Smarty Jones at Belmont//
voters remember, hes just thinks all his loses are dick riders/
You and your whole crew are goin down, Wannabe Rappers, Fifty cent biters//

scrap

uppin for ur spit

explanations..>

2nd line= thats how it twists// Twisted Goverment is his crew
5th, 7th, 8th 9th line, all starts with the members of his crew
M'just = Mite Just
10th line-- his sig says Voters Remember..a link to the rules of voting
the lines with his crew..

his crew just sucks. lol

Fifty cent biters
what the fuck you talking about?50 cent can suck my dick and you can too fag. i'll spit after pizza

I think its the opposite. Your on fiftys dick. Spit ur verse u lame queer.

ayo check it

the name is a.k.a., a killin' asshole cause i'ma true villian//
i'll crack this kids skull open and be like where the cream filling//
see you new so you at the end of the train like a caboose//
my level of skill well send a bullet to the deuce//
i been here long and i came alot stronger don't think you even close to my crew//
you call yourself the deuce but this kid can't even coiunt to two//
i was banned for being too good and you got the shit twisted like my government//
i can spit simple shit and everyone even you loving it//
dude your just battling me why diss the team//
this can't just mad cauise he can't get in if you no what i mean//
this cat ain't even got a battle record so how does he think he so good//
get out of the game right now you really should//

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lets get some votes
but we no who won:

your truely

k uppin number 1 vote on this.............................................. ......................

ok let look at some shall we
i got tupac as my rapper no fifty
no where have i ever giving props to fifty or siad his lines cause his are just gay
and i ain't got to explain my votes people get them the first time

I explain because so retards dont understand high vocab and good rhyme scheme.

Uppin..................uPPIN!!! vote on this bitch................................

alright check this

duece: ur shit was good i liked ur personals..and ur punches were ok...your flow was good..but ur structure needs work on...PM me and i can help u..or if u have msn or aim..good job

AKA: not that good..it was aiight....but u lacked personals..and ur punches werent that good...ur flow and structure was good..but thaz about it...good try thouigh

vote: the deuce

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Yo AKA , ur shit was ill , the rookie punch lines was good, u need some better Vocab but other than that ur shit was clean

Duece ur shit was good but if ur gonna dis on a number of peeps then u got to make the shit more amusing....i didnt like how u put it together


Crew vote removed

ooo shit real close battle... i liked aka's verse even tho he didnt have the best flow.. but he definitely came with better punches then deuce soo close battle but punches win battles soo vote goes to aka

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ayo state you just mad cause i' wouldn't let you in my crew