Daclassin Vs. Hoops
 

RULES:
10 lines
no hate/v
no crew/v
no dr/v
no feeding
no recycling
no biting
Due in 30 minutes from this post.. lets go...

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My verse
 

10 lines aight..
this kid thinks hes an einstein, the IQ of a genius..
when really theres a thin line, between him and a penis..
they think "strait", but all thoughts are predictable..
and like unregistered voters, all spits he spat are restrictable..
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..
search the net, only things my verse biting is you..
and yea ya lines are classic, cause your rhyme styling is thru..
you cant "put me down" like gay men tranqulizing on top of me..
fag would prolly "cop" a feel,cause thats the only way he knows of stoppin me..

The Classic verse
 

Ladies and gentlemen once again.....he did it....

I'm like shaq when it comes to attacking the hoops

The classic vs hulahoopz

I'm bout to leave this fucka somewhere secluded with no population

I'll leave you with writers block left on an island for rhyming stories
He always finds himself lost in thought - It's an unfamiliar territory
I will tear his glory in pieces with something compared to a thesis
That was said By something In bibles that was quoted by jesus
Why I'm facin' the creation of a hideous, Ferocious fuckin hoard
All your battles is a team battle, When your a siamese twin of a backboard
I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops
Females say you not even cute, Make up artists would take a full day
Can I borrow your face, because My Ass(butt) is going on holiday.

nice verse... lets get this voted one





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uppin...bring votes please

uppin this to the top for some votes.. =) much appreciated

dunno if it will be counted, cos i dont think i have 100 posts... but ima drop a vote anyway just to give a opinion..

i reckon hoops took it.. was close though. His punches hit harder and his personals were solid. Decent flow, maybe one or two stretches but pretty much kept it on all the time.

classic, your punches were weak man... flow was aiight, and i think a little better than hoops, but you gotta hit harder, use personals and wordplay and shit brother... could have been a lot better. I think you think that by using big words or more than one syllable rhymes it will win you the battle... that shit means nothing man, its all punches.. but punches with no flow are shit.. its keeping balance that wins you battles.

v/hoops..

peace

thanks for your thoughts, I'm not a simple rhymer like most. If you ever read my other battles that's the way I always rap. lol Nothing new I guess it's new to you. I truly think I am going to come out on top anyway...even though it's not my best shit lol. Thanks for your opinions. uppin.

and to tell you the truth I had a personal and the wordplay was there do you even know what a personal and what wordplay is....lol this is my last battle in frontlines maybe ? lol

sorry guys didnt realise you needed 100 posts to vote so imma not going saying anything dont want to swing it in anyones favour
all im going to say is koo battle from both of you.

No hate on this vote but...i think daclassic won this battle...he punches hit hardewr and hes wordplay was good....hoop.u had a chance if u didnt use the Penis line but stil...ya rhyme was ok.....ya wordplay was ok.....da classic used some personals....ok both of ya on struc and mutlis....but....overall daclassic wins wit wordplay and personals

Yo sine i votewd on this battle both of ya vote on ym topical wit .....Virt iight

Look it was sick verses from both competitors, i'll break the battle down from the sickest 2 bars(4 lines) from each:

Hoops:
they think "strait", but all thoughts are predictable..
and like unregistered voters, all spits he spat are restrictable..
funny how this kid longs to be a man of color..
usin slang like "Da" in names, while screamin "HEY! Whats up brother"..

I was feelin these bars from Hoops...

Da Classic:
Why I'm facin' the creation of a hideous, Ferocious fuckin hoard
All your battles is a team battle, When your a siamese twin of a backboard
I'm detachin' your chord , From hard tapping on keyboards. Oops!!
The reason I'm america's most wanted top ten, Is for shooting hoops

Was feeling these too...

Both cats spit put hard verses but i simply have to go with Da Classic cuz his word play was much better and therefore made for a stronger verse... Plus his shit was funny... Keep up the hot shit both of ya

hehe.. coo coo.. im down 2, but mike aint make the bball team either freshman year.. so wus really GOOD!! lol jus jokes hehe.. aight uppin .. 0-2 classic..thankx for feedback thus far