ThisGirlspitfire\\vs//Ambitionz
 

aight here are the rules
no hatin
no feedin
no d/r
no crew votes
10-15 lines

make it 3-0 ko....checkin in ya verse due 10 minutes afta mine...

aight we can do that.....dont worry ill write mine right after yours

hol up naw nigga how u gone take all day and tell me i only get 10 minutes its been 10 minutes since yo check in....hmmm....imma take as much time as you did how bout that

huh......still waitin......clocks tickin......yea i know u aint back down

o my fuckin goodness why the fuck haven't you dropped yet....well its saturday and im not waitin all night fa u so the rule bout 10 minutes or wuteva time limit shit is off aight cuz u takin mad long.....dam ya rhymes aint hot anyway i gotta go holla back maybe you can write somethin hot by then

Spoke a rhyme of water, and ya dyin to float
Wrote shes a girl...but ya afraida dickrydin votes?
Neva make it big, im here to expose the hoar in ya sig
And when I sed 'wacks in you' the bitCh started to dig
Defense low, and wack is stress, and each word spokens tense
Shiet only 'shellz' you throw come at the end of ya sentence
Face-it, aint gonna fake-it, fuck ya jus str8 up dont fit
how u gon rap when ya look like an octopus takin a hit
Claim to fame, but ya wack as before still didnt change
Only thing you did right...was oxy-moronin ya name


*sigs seys 'put bitches to sleep', dig=finger
**period...
***hit=sex
****oxymoron is a contradicting statement or sentence

aiight extendin to 30 minutes...dont get dont vote...good luck

aight it said i was uppin the battle to much but i haven't even posted my verse yet...i dont know wuts going on ....but here is my check in imma try to see if it will let me drop my verse now

I flow like a pro tho still i stay sexier than yo girl
How i spit better rhymes than you...and yet its a mans world?
You coming at me nigga you didnt bring ya A game
cuz ive heard every femcee joke and been called everyname
But again ill explain cuz its not gettin to ya brain
check me out this girl spits fire and throws flames
The votes are not in so this battle is up for grabs
This pussy prolly seen and rode more dicks than i have
Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty
You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty
Im simply...the best... lyrical shots to ya chest will put u to rest
Exterminatin these pest one by one with no weapon
You need some help but sorry theres is none for your condition
I thought you was comin harder than that...change ya name nigga you have no ambition

that is thisgirlspitsfire's verse she asked me to post it for her cuz it wouldn't let her do it

yea i sent my friend to drop my verse becuase it kept sayin that i had upped my battle to many times or somethin like dat so i juss sent it to him to drop

aiight

thisgirl: your shit was nice...good flow good structure....good personals good punches good vocab...good wordplay...jus all around god

ambitiionz: ur shit was confusin and jumped around a bit ur shit was aiight nothin special...good personals...ok punches....good flow n structure

vote:thisgirl

i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886

Uppin............................................. ...

aiight his vote should be dQed for two reasons

1.He didnt get my punches...i said if you dont get dont vote
2.We're currently in a battle against each other

Ambitionz-- ya shit was tite i didnt like your flow, strucutre was coo and punches were decent

Thisgirl-- this merked ambitionz wit it

Woah I know that aint ya only rhymes cuz ive got plenty
You get no pussy thats why ya lotion bottle stay empty

ya whole verse made me laugh, humorous strong punches i like dat

v/thisgirlspitfire