mjust23 vs. genicide
 

check this ok... 10 linez.. i drop first u drop right after... ok lets get this bitch goin.

all your raps r weak, no real skills,full of bold shoutin//
this guy sucks more cocks than nicole kiddman in cold mountain//
step to me wrong and get shank stabbed//
this fairy trows more balls than donavan mcnabb//
ya raps is garbage,they belong in da dump//
ma rymes will leave u shaken, twisted like donald trump//
im battlen so dis bitch will stop all his damn fussin//
u have no flow plus u look like princes gay cuzin//
battlen me u get hit wit punches and multies in da dome//
this cats pussy, am i battlen a guy or raven simone.

15 Mjust23 must be fan of air Jordan but that nigga is no longer good
And just keep running from our battle cause bitch you know u should.
This nigga is telling me he 13 so he can duck our showdown
Then I find out he’s 15 and he’s keeping it on the lowdown..

MJust21: how old r u
gameova119: 16
gameova119: u?
MJust21: im 13
gameova119: ok
MJust21: u should be better than me

Rookie of the month, then what am I best vet.. Certainly not
needs pre-written shit for all his battles..Cause he certainly aint hot

gameova119: yo u still ducking me?
MJust21: i aint battlin for a while
gameova119: ducking me
MJust21: naw, i aint got no new material
MJust21: gimme a day

U think u hot cause u a flyweight but u really just a herb
And you do more running and duckin then if ur name was a verb
Im done now dawg, this boi's runnin outta breath
Beat this lil herb fagget, WHO THA FUCKS NEXT?

explanations:
ok look at his age in his profile on that link..

thatz Genicide, just cause his punchs connectd, and he provid'd proof of his stuff. haaaa...

u have no flow plus u look like princes gay cuzin//??? wtfz tha?

no hate mjust. I just liked Gen's beter, cause better vocab. better punchs, n al that, Peace.

prince the singer yall, purple rain...............

dayum Genocide got this easily

genicide..nice shit mayn..good punches n personals.....i was feelin dem,....it was sick......and ur flow and structure was good too

mjust" you have potential but its not good enuff...you can do better jus keep elevatin..only thing good was ur flow..and ur personals were aiight

vote:genicide

i aint gon poll vote this until u drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1368163

iight this was a tight battle but to be honest i gotta give this one to mjust i was feeling his punchlines alittle more and his lines were makin sense .. some of your line genicide was just pretty lame but to be honest you had alot more personal's ..flow ... and ......damn mjust you had some hot punchlines i was fellling all of em they were all hitten hard ..and were makin alot of sense...
but overall i gotta give this one to mjust23 for having structure..punchlines

v=mjust23

uppin for votes yall

yeah dont sleep on this lets get some votes rolling

OOOO MY GOD
gen took this one son check it out:

all your raps r weak, no real skills,full of bold shoutin//
this guy sucks more cocks than nicole kiddman in cold mountain//
this was good man ill give taht to you.... good connection with nicole kiddman...... (8/10)

step to me wrong and get shank stabbed//
this fairy trows more balls than donavan mcnabb//
okay not the best line in the world.... and we dont need a celeb in every line...... (6/10)

ya raps is garbage,they belong in da dump//
ma rymes will leave u shaken, twisted like donald trump//
alrite enough with the damn celebreties!!!!...... (6/10)

im battlen so dis bitch will stop all his damn fussin//
u have no flow plus u look like princes gay cuzin//
no bad not bad at all man......(7/10)

battlen me u get hit wit punches and multies in da dome//
this cats pussy, am i battlen a guy or raven simone.
holy shit man what were you thinking........ enough already.... (5/10)

(im subtracting 4 points- no multis and not good personals at all- but not bad for a newb)

mjust28-28/50

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15 Mjust23 must be fan of air Jordan but that nigga is no longer good
And just keep running from our battle cause bitch you know u should.
good personal gen but not a very good opener, liek i said, i htink this entire battle has had enough celebs..... (7/10)

This nigga is telling me he 13 so he can duck our showdown
Then I find out he’s 15 and he’s keeping it on the lowdown..
great personal way to look deep and catch im in his lie man!..... (8/10)

MJust21: how old r u
gameova119: 16
gameova119: u?
MJust21: im 13
gameova119: ok
MJust21: u should be better than me
i like that alot..............bringing in a convo

Rookie of the month, then what am I best vet.. Certainly not
needs pre-written shit for all his battles..Cause he certainly aint hot
i know you can hit harder than that man comon gen.... (6/60)

gameova119: yo u still ducking me?
MJust21: i aint battlin for a while
gameova119: ducking me
MJust21: naw, i aint got no new material
MJust21: gimme a day
once again im like that.......

U think u hot cause u a flyweight but u really just a herb
And you do more running and duckin then if ur name was a verb
sweet man i liek that, since running and ducking are verbs....killa (9/10)

Im done now dawg, this boi's runnin outta breath
Beat this lil herb fagget, WHO THA FUCKS NEXT?
awesome closer man great win.... (8/80)

im giving 4 points to gen cause i like that convo alot!

~genicide~- 42/50


clearly my vote here is for gen

good win

genicide...dats all i gotta say its kinda obvious...

i wanna battle sum1 wats good????....im not all dat good

Genicide took it pretty easily.. punches were stronger and personalls.. i liked the convo in the battle too.. lol

mjust- work on some solid personals.. u had a good battle

v/genicide

hit my sig up mjust plz

aight genecide u got my vote.better punches.your opener was weak but and so were the first 2 punches but then u came bak.work on better closers.flow wasnt bad try splittin up rhymes.not ur best verse. mjust all u had good in this battle was flow not bad. a little choppy sometimes.some of ur punches didnt make sense like the donald trump one i duno wat happened wit that.but ur verse was weak if u wana win battles u gota come harder.

v/G