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AO AKA GOT-UM 06-27-04 01:20 AM

Love So Much(love Poem)
 
Of All Girls Ive Ever Meet
Youre The One I Cant Foreget
God Picked You From All The Rest
Becuase He Knew I Loved You Best
Your Heart Is Like A Pot Of Gold
So Hard To Find So Hard To Hold
I Had A Heart Once And It Was True
But Now Its Gone From Me To You
Takecare Of It As I Have Done
Cause Now You Two And I Have None
If I Get To Heaven And Your Not There
Ill Wait For You By The Golden Stairs
If Your Not There On Judgement Day
Ill Know You Went The Other Way
Ill Give Back The Crown The Angels And Wings
And Just To Prove My Love Is True
Ill Go To Hell To Be With You

The Mexican 06-30-04 10:31 PM

Damn...kid...dat is hott...showed alot of emotion an ain't scared to post it fa da public...very nice poem...i give dat shyt a 10/10

God 06-30-04 11:18 PM

iight it was decent .... but it could have been better...

nice emotion ..nice imagery...

candy 07-16-04 02:08 AM

It Was A Nice Poem I'm Going To Agree With Lnj It Could Of Been Better But It Was Really Good


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