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Mag... 06-27-04 12:40 PM

COME and LEARN... a keystyle presentation
 
i'm bored... so just gonna key up some mad flavour...


I'm demonous... seemingly seamless
I'm dreamin up...
new ways to start beamin up...
extraterristrial kids
face it I bestin y'all with
mad movement and motion...
morose in depeche mode...
makin sure the most know that Mag is The Dopeness


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alright the intro is done... speculate if you will
bout to kick the ill one... introspective to spill
fillin pen's with my blood insane in my veins....
dripping when I start a flow that puts em to shame

kids say:

what's the sonic news?
magnificent abuse...
I induce views of calibrated clues....
kneel next to pews
pray to your saviour
savour the flavour with tablets of paper

confused knowledge craver?
I'll get simplistic less mystic and rhyme in block format
newspaper communion drops to the floor on the doormat
we want the hardcore back yet don't realize where it went
so theorize about lies until all you rhetoric is spent
I'll sit back dispense common sense about ghetto communes
and rock my spit on calm tunes sparking off the bomb truths...

like we're a diseased and unpleased mass
of upper, middle, lower trash class
sitting in the back of a row of a million desks...
and did you know that you weren't trying your best???
I did...
cuz sweltering cities are filled with cheap whores
who's asses are tapped more times than keyboards
then ask for please more oh baby oh please more!
I'm beggin for the S-T-D's transferred more than M-P-3s
focused on slim shady LPs chokin it down cuz Em said 'Wheeze"
Jeeeeeeezus Christ I'm tired of saying it twice...
here's my last advice...

If you don't fucking get this verse right
go blow your brains out in the middle of the night!


~~~~FIN~~~~

Mag... 06-27-04 01:36 PM

it's terrible that I get any sleep on this site... lol

Poppa Kap 06-27-04 01:46 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by Magnificent

what's the sonic news?
magnificent abuse...
I induce views of calibrated clues....
kneel next to pews
pray to your saviour
savour the flavour with tablets of paper



^^^dope. Nice vocab and rhyming. I found it sort of boring just because it wasnt really a topic on anything, more of a self glorifying piece but no doubt it was good. I would like to see you do a deeper piece with the same calibre of the above.

:)

MADDRAPPER 06-27-04 01:50 PM

not bad but let me drop this one time up[ in here

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WHAT HAPPENED TO DMX JUNE 6?

Above the rim vexed like DMX cash in hand smash van
At Kennedy Airport steal cars this reveal scars from the hood understand
Go with lame impression after cocaine possession need a plan
Charges several flagrant after impersonation of a federal agent
Police with facts discreet found in the backseat a Billy Club
Cop yelled “Silly Thug” are you a Rodney King dud?”
DMX said “well can we just get along? I’m not a scrub”
He was wearing a dew rag black holding a bag of crack
Had a gun and that’s bad fun JACKIE HUDGINS
Don’t Believe in tacky thugging both cats got me bugging
He’ll need support in court on July twenty third his crew fly
With plenty words

Mag... 06-27-04 02:47 PM

^^get your own thread...





















btw that was wack....

Mag... 06-28-04 04:00 PM

uppp with three ps


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