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help please
help please
Can someone help me elevate in my rhyming because it's all over the place at the moment and want to become better so I can develop a good style for my self. I also struggle with iternal rhyming and where to put multies inside the flow so I need this explaining well aswell as the following information. differen't ways of rhyming?/ how 2 set the rhymes out/ best way in rhyming sound alikes and perfect/ multies, where can you conclude dem/ half rhymes confuze me and need help on dem 2/ need a little verse as an example with highlighted text/ word play, I'm not 2 confident about dat/ Please can I have words bolded with the rhymin words in it/ With all these things solved for me I can start a fresh and I can practice with my progress, just need some ideas 2 open a few doors. |
if u dont rhyme well..
rhymer.com different types of rhyming end rhymes.. last sylablle rhymes.. double rhymes.. beginning rhymes.. first syllable rhymes.. end rhymes probably id put them in first 2 lines.. maybe a few in the middle and close to the end and stop there.. half rhyme Thurston Chruch half of it rhymes.. if u dont get it dont use them there difficult and i dont have tyme at the moment to right a verse but pm me bout it and i can help you.. pz |
go to tutorials..
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dat explains it a little bit but not as much as I said. Like how many times would you rhyme da ends with a perfect rhyming or sound alike?... I want to know how to rhyme well and get confuzed where to iternal rhyme or use multies dats what I wanna know...
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All I Gotta Say...is Jusss Think In Ya Head....and Think Of Words That Rhyme And When It Comes To Rhymin Put Those Words Into Different Situations In Lyrics.......
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quick but not very helpful lesson on rhyming:
rhyming is very easy, watch me: 1-2 sylible rhyming: I am gay// i smoke weed everyday// outsider needs to elevate// but this guy doesn't even really know how to masturbate// ^^no hate// but dont be getting Economics in a rage// or he'll rape ur mom in a bamboo cage/// that's just an example and the confessions aren't true 3+ syllible and more complex rhyming(which if u think about it, ain't that complex: yo this bitch rhymes like he's a asian driver// who found his licence out of a cereal box, bitch take up a profession as a dick rider// he is just a outsider, he's having trouble rhyming// the only time he flows is when he's ejectuating// sorry i can't come up with better rhymes but, this is it, think about how these words are pronounced, and read it out loud, then find words that rhymes with it..... and people believe me, i'm way better than this, check out and vote at y battle, which i only used half the effort: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132116 if u still dont get this, take a look into the tuitorals |
^^let this be a lesson to all u wack cats out there..........read carefully
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there, i think thats enuff said
i should post shit into the tuitorals if i'm a good teacher...lol not likely |
tutorials Is here
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Really, I would just stick to a multi or two in a set of lines, where you generally rhyme just one syllable (end rhyme). Like:
You are in the muck, you clearly suck I am so cool, I drive a truck You can even do 3 multis in a line, make it a bit longer though because otherwise the flow might get too choppy. There's also comlex rhyming, where you rhyme two words with one or two words. Like: I'm known for defeating douchebags And you have less support than Larouche has The nicest rhyme, I think, is a combination of a multi and two syllable rhyming. The most important thing is really to learn how to ditch the rhyming dictionary, and worry about vowel sounds, and which letters sound enough alike to rhyme. |
^^dont steal my thunder
nahhhhh just joking cuz |
listen to shadow's edge the kid is supremely elevated for this site...also read my keystyles...there full of multi's and complexe rhyming schemes...use nice vocab...don't always rhymes words together that they can guess what the last bar will be...
like...mic and dyke or trike bike... use things like... weakness and facetious or hospital and profitable...it's easy and it makes things more interesting... |
you've helped me alot cheers, I find dat complexity shows more creative which is how I like to write lyrics cuz it sounds boring with perfect rhymes but do you have to use dem now and again to mix up the flow... how does it work?
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Yeah, perfect rhymes are nice when you are doing an internal rhyme scheme, or something tricky, otherwise people might not catch it.
so if you do something like: xxxxA xxxB xxB xxxxxA you want that to rhyme pretty well, or people won't catch it. |
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