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Mixtape vs Marvelis
10-or-15 lins
30 mins u spit frist ok |
good luck kid.....................................
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Haha......yeah......Checkin in.........i'll drop soon.......
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Here’s some food for thought from a starvin artist...
I’ma make the once skilled Marvelis fall off like rawkus... This fag probably wants to get all us dudes in a room to cock-us... Man ya flow is so average, ya shits makin me sea sick... Me against you is like playin' twister with quadriplegics... My explosive punch lines rock the world harder than Titan missiles... My Demigod like flow’ll fucked up Marvelis like pissin on cripples... Shit I’ll do a verbal half back flips, so my anus kisses his lips... He can’t see me like guerillas in the mist peelin’ banana clips... I spit my opinions like I got a mouth full a pennies... Marvelis is waitin’ to be served like blacks a Denny’s... Once my rhymes are deployed I rip cats like steroids... Marvelis ya shit couldn’t be fresh, if all you at was altoids... I took some time off and accented to a new heights... But manye i merked ya in dis battle, so you'll prolly better off leavin dis site... Cmon manye drop your verse.... |
aiight sick verse can u drop a vote in this battle..wen he drops ill vote on this shit..or any other battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811
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yo yo yo
this kid need to bring he's bag of trax to beat me but i thank he want to be me........ he's making me sick and he's just riding my dick tape my nuts to ur lisp for u can be by my ass he lost this battle becuz u said my 4 times u going to pop on a dime in going to live u in my dust u but fuck u fucked up kid ur battleing da Marvlis one im da mf sun and im bring da guns that da gun and fucking bast ur dick off and i'll tell u to suck it bitch im ripping da mic and flipping da stip im da nigga that put da hip in hop u on my block, drop like its hot nigga just like a rock nigga Mixtape u just did ur fate......... he can't battle out of a bag........oh shit its his bag of traxs |
i did it but it is gay
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eww
mixtape: better punches better personals...ok structure ok flow....ur vocavb wasnt there....didnt see any multi's marvelis: weak...i wasnt feelin anythin of ur verse...keep elevatin u had weak punches n personals...ok flow...bad structure i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...d.php?p=1369886 |
Openor: Mix
Structure: Mix Flow: Mix Punches: Mix Personal: Mix Closer: mix vote mix |
Uppin 1......Vote People.......Leave a Link if ya want........
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Yo.....Mixtape won thsi battle..his punches hit much harder ....marv u need to start working on sturc that kill you....and....mixtape wordplayu won this bvattle....he need to start doing some personals.....but his wordplay,punchlines....won this battle iiight
Vote-Mix |
mixtape u had some good punches, the starter was pretty hot, n the rest of ya shit worked well too, aint no problems there.
marvelous i dont no what u was tryin to get at in most of ya verse, ima give this one to mixtape, by far. vote- mixtape i need votes in my battles so return the favor |
Mixtape, I hate your name, lol. But, anyway, I like your vocabulary a lot, I like seeing that in people's battles. You knocked Marvelis with your punches, good work.
Marvelis, you need to work on your flowin' skills, scructure and vocabulary, try to be more complex. Vote: Mixtape Please vote for my current battle, please, we need votes. 1. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100 |
Uppin 2....Vote People Just 1 more vote...Cmon now...Leave a Link.......
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