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Decree Wun 06-27-04 06:24 PM

State Capitol vs rap master
 
aiight lez go

10 lines
no d/r cv or biting
blind spit
no feedin
good luck
1 hour to spit after check in

Decree Wun 06-27-04 06:34 PM

where you at fam............................................... ......

Rap Master 06-27-04 06:35 PM

im here sorry just got done battilin flag you first lez go

Rap Master 06-27-04 06:36 PM

gl dude

Decree Wun 06-27-04 06:47 PM

so you jus checked in now you only got an hour to spit so u better drop now....

This Kids Wack I "Master Rap" This Kid "Master's-BATIN"......
I Spit That "Godly" Flow, but spit Hotter then "Satin"......
if you touched a Contagious Chinese man you still couldn't be Sick.....
Your Wack Shit is Exposed like bad magic tricks..........
u try to be just like me, Break-ur-legs, now try to Walk In My shoes bitch...
Spit-Sick, Spit one line and make your whole computer Glitch.....
This Kid Lies, He's really a fag and enjoy's watchin gay porn....
Drop-a-line-N- Leave your Body Ripped Up-N-Torn.......
this Kid's A wack Rapper By Day A Gay stripper by night.....
Like A Paraplegic tryin to hold a pen, This Bitch CAn't Wrote......

Decree Wun 06-27-04 06:49 PM

last word is write my fault........................

Rap Master 06-27-04 06:56 PM

yo yo you need to quit rappin/
homo you smoke weed because you afraid to start crappin/
cause ill come in packin showin mee 44 yellin wee hee because you start mappin/
yo pieces to but you back together you right im a fag a female ass grapper/
You mag you know wat dat means/
you the gay fuckers and homo komo queens/
If i was like you id be a suckey ass rapper/
And i aint afraid to got to da crapper/
so i dont try to be like you state/
you need to shut da fuck up and go find yo gay azz mate/

Archeologist 06-27-04 07:27 PM

State Capitol won his for a better verse and hard hitting punches.. Flow was smooth structure was bad though..
Rap Master you were ok and have alot of potential.. punches need working on though..
i would like to battle you to help us both elevate.. you wanna battle?
pz.

Decree Wun 06-27-04 07:28 PM

who me or rap master?................................

Archeologist 06-27-04 07:31 PM

Rap master :)..
Dnt forget to vote on my battle if he drops :rolleyes:..
pz.

God 06-27-04 07:35 PM

damn this was a verse easybattle to call but ima have to go with state on this he had reall good verse .... rap master your verse was decent but you really didnt have any personals .. you basicall had structure and alittle bit of punchlines...

as for rap you had decent punchlines that hit alittleand and....decent personals.....but overall it was very close it was maybe on of the closed battles ive seen ..

-vote=state
please drop your poll on my battle in my sig

Daclassic 06-27-04 08:11 PM

Scapitol: structure i guess was okay. this verse wasnt the best seen from you. but it still made this battle very lopsided. decent punches, your verse was just all out better.

rm: You need to elevate seriously. it's like you rushed your verse. what you need to do is take your time. it seemed as if you were just putting words in there to rhyme just to get it over with. How many times have you battled?

v/SC

mC RIOT 06-27-04 08:19 PM

State Capitol took this one easily. Rap Master...you kinda hot but your flow is way to simple. Your punchlines were weak and some of your similes/metaphors werent really all there to da full package.
vote: State Capitol

drop an honest vote on da battles below

FlagrantFoul 06-27-04 08:45 PM

State took it. LARGE. The paraplegic line was tight. Exposed magic tricks! SWEET. Nice wordplay, tight flow, funny shit.

Rap Master. I think not. "Suckey ass rappers" ?! You should lose on that weak ass line alone. You brought nada.

WINNER: STATE by a landslide.


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