FluidMoon vs. yung chris
 

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Check in by midnight
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checkin in........where is yung chris? has anyone seen him, yeah, hes the one whos gonna get beat up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'll expose this guy- lyrically ur status aint even close to mine,
home on computers- lonely, cuz u aint old enough to drive
too " yung " for my rhymes, and the X in ur face aint even rated
i'll leave u jaded, cuz u still need moms permission to play bitch
ur wasted- answerin callouts with 5 posts will get a guy choked,
I know- that in ur case youll learn that in just 5 votes-
cuz ima rhyme around u, its that easy, circles a simple shape
but to conform to the positions I'll bend you- Sorry shit will break
but for u to have half the skill i posess, would be a pro-cess
cuz i aint talking about ur classes when i say its a "slow" test

checkin by midnight fool.............................................. ..........................................

Y0U A R00KIE, DA KID IS A CHAMPI0N, Y0U FR0M N.Y? WHY U AINT PUT YA H00D UP? U PR0BALLY FR0M THA HAMPT0NS!!

Y0U A FAGG0T, DATS DEALIN WIT A HUSTLA, Y0UR A 24 YEAR 0LD WH0 GETS EXICITED WEN HE BATTLES A Y0UNGSTA!

ST0P RAPPIN, Y0URE TW0 0LD, LET G0, IM WAY YUNGA THAN Y0U AND PR0BALLY SEEN WAY M0 D0E!

D0NT SPEAK 0N ME CAUSE Y0U D0NT KN0W WHERE I BEEN, I BEEN PUTTIN 20'S 0N BUICK'S AND DRIVEN EM WIT N0 LICENCE

DUDES A CL0WN Y0U CAN TELL BY HIS RAP STYLE, NIGGA DIS REAL LIFE THIS AINT N0 BATTLE 0FF 8 MILE!!

G0 FIND A H00KER, AND PAY TA SUDUCE HER, IF Y0U KEEP BATTLIN NIGGAZ LIKE ME Y0ULL BE LABELED AS A L0SER!!





:nono: :nono: :nono:

aiight...weak battle.....fluid took it...he had better punches...chris i dont think any ofdf yours landed...elevate both



http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125456

^^return the favor.....

wack battle but i thinkk chris git this he had a better vocab and flow return the bvote in my battle it is in the sig

1 and 1 uppin for votes cuz thats what we do................................................ ......................................

FluidMoon vs. yung chris
 

young chris-your verse was ok i did like this line

and this was ok


fluid-it think your verse had abit more flow
and you had some good punches in there
this would have made a good closer


vote-FluidMoon... for overall structure that's all

good by both keep it up...

Uppin ish.................................up..up...uppin ....away

this was a weak battle, fluid..nice flow and iight punches..yung ur flow was off but u had sum punches but u need to use more complex punches..u both need to elevate and use personals
v/fluid
return the favor wit honest votes on dis http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131811

Ummm...yung chris's structure of how he did his lines made me confused and made me off flow, you change how you write your lines. Yung Chris had better punches and better personals, but was it all true?

Ummm...fluidmoon you need to work your complex rhymes and use better vocabulary in your wordplay.

But, I think yung chris lost this one because he wasn't flowing as greatly and you needa good flow to win a battle. Opener and Ender belongs to fluidmoon. Punches belong to yung chris. Personals belongs to yungchris. Flow belongs to fluidmooon. No multies. Structure belongs to fluidmoon. Vocabuluary belongs to yung chris.

Vote: fluidmoon

Please vote in my current battle, I need votes.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132100

hmm weak battle

punches~Fluid & yung
structure~Fluid
wordplay and that hsit~fluid

FLuid won probably cuz she had better structure. Lean your verse up Chris so people with less undertsandin(not me) will vote for ya'

Imma have 2 give this battle to fluid he had better punches man and better structure...

V//Fluid Moon