::Vote::-bODy cOUnT- vs. K-awdik::DROP LINKS::
 

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blind spit
due 20 minutes after check in
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time starts when i check in right after you...1

Nigga runnin from an ass whoopin...
 

MAn this cat accepted my battle, of my credits was a waste
And not becuause his thought of freestyles jus copy, Paste
Probably a biter tryin to be slick yo i rekon...
Since im tryin to hunt his bitch ass down so he can fuckin check-in
A get this lesson, a get what i got on my mind off
I looked up in the index and this nigga musta signed off
He prolly find some free time to write that i wanna be him
When this nigga signed off after he jus got my pm
Callin him to the lions den so he can get ripped to pieces
Or get shitted on until this cat becomes part of the feces
Or get scratched off like its my balls, he's a flea see
Cuz Im provin to this candy cat, how to correctly eat a reeses
Even if this checks in for him it could be the end
But if i fid out where he live at, i'll get my not so little friend :shoot: :shoot:

checkin in...........................................

youll be my first "body" to plummet my first triumph to "count"
ya record 9-6 future says 9-7 how ya feelin da amount
im tryin ta throw bouldas ya strugglin ta toss a pebble
the stress will leave ya in a casket 6ft below my level
rapbattles ya joined in Jan 6 months soon i came in june
my flows spit a severe virus while yours was left with no immune
i see ya trin ta come at me in a different perspective
ill shoot ya wit a bullet take it out and keep it as a collective
ya in my section i dont need ta bite ya seriously need correction
afta ta battle have ya feelin like clash collision heads in a intersection
steppin up ya takin a risk ya just stunted
ta win start off by prayin like you was being hunted
just forya flow hobby to diminish dont need 20 minutes to finish
cuz once i checked in i knew i served up a lyrical deadly dish

bodycount dat was a ill start 2 yo verse, and it ended great 2 u have my vote

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return da fava plz!!!!!!!!!!! i have 3 batttles dats still not finished plzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

hey Bodycount you know and I know that shytown is not makin sense. He did not explain his vote, just gave ya props and was straight dickridin on your verse and is now askin basically for you to vote for him on his battle.This vote should be Disqualified.

Vote-K.awdik

neither verse was anythin special....but yall came at each other

k u had better punches a good flow was just overall better....body count ur shit was pretty standard and ur flow was off in parts (u fucked up the rhyme scheme at parts 2)....k just came harder

alright uppin for votes..............................

hmm... body count, you had potential punches... like that sign off line.. coul dof been ya finisher if you would worded much better.. but all in all it was a ok verse.. most of your lines seemed a tad bit stretched.. just work on shortening you lines, and your verse will be alot more flow efficient..

K- you had a nice drop.. it had some nice multies, and a few ok punches.. i believe it was a lil better, due to the flow of it and the structure...

due to that...

my vote goes to K

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132933


return a vote to this battle .. Much appreciated

bodycount and k nice battle.but i could tell who won jus by the openers.bodycount ur opener was jus great it made me laugh i liked it great flow and sturucture kept it flowin good.fresh verse wit hard hittin personals.k nice flow and all too u had ur whole verse personals and that was good but some were weak so thats the only reason u didnt get my vote but nice drop

v/bodycount
return the favore vote honest here
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

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again uppin for votes..............................

If this battle was on openers alone- I'd give it to Kawdic because his opener was pretty nasty, it stuck pretty hard... However both verses went on and I think Body Count was more consistent with his flows... both verses flowed well and had pretty good structure, but Body Count was sayin wittier things, His punches weren't all that hard but he through a few and I felt his style... Kawdic I think you show definate potential with your opener, and the rest of the verse wasn't horrible- it wasnt basic, but you didn't say anything that made me look twice, or chuckle or be like damn. It seemed like a couple rhymes were forced... like saying you'll keep the bullet as a collective... I don't know anyone that collects things and calls them collectives, because a "collective" doesn't exist- its an adjective not a noun in the way you mean it... collective as a noun would be like a business enterprise, or the sum of an entire collection. blah blah sorry for ranting... Good Job both, Good luck in the future... Vote BodyCount