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SkOtEe 06-28-04 07:38 PM

-SoLdIeR- VS lil trip
 
10 lines,
spit by 10 mins ot the hour,
no recycling,
no d/r

good luck.....

SkOtEe 06-28-04 07:47 PM

This lil punk must be "trippin" i heard wana cum test me//
must been smokin crack, dropped a pill or thick is he?//
im a soldier, take no prisoners, ur never going free//
im doing ten, your doing life, in the cemetry//
da biggest thing in ya trousas is a nine milly//
but i heard u dnt evn carry a gun so wot is it really?//

his bitch gets kinda kinky, i "smacker" n get her lips wet//
this dude be fukin lotsa bitches...yep you guessed it, hes a vet!//
lil terrorist wannabee, tryd to blow up his skool bus//
burnt his mouth on the exhaust pipe now he jus spits gas and dust!//

come on bitch, spit back.....

Lil-trip 06-28-04 07:50 PM

aight...
 
checked in, lets go ill do my spit.....................

SkOtEe 06-28-04 08:04 PM

look son, i said i wanted sumin quik.... i said spit by 10 mins to the hour!!
how longs it take you to to write 5 bars?

Lil-trip 06-28-04 08:05 PM

...
 
Listen up bitch your a Loner whos rap career from the beginnin was Over
Stickin Helmets over his Shoulder on his bois dick-"Head" thinkin hes a solider
Whenever theres a migrane this pussy like a Migrane he spits n swells Out
your n underated sellout who in the "Straight" parade "Tripped" n fell out
You got nothin on me lackin true creativity along with real ability
When you want Skill jus feed of me n ill read you a real Page of "G"
Soldier frontin n spittin Slow thinkin hes gangsta when he was 16 years old
Your destined to Fold n "Sell" your latest MO..Homo only Stickn When its Cold
Joints i jus spark it U couldnt "Shoot-Fire" if yo spits sat at the end of Rockets
You couldnt be "Solid" if you where a "Metal" n tried to Assault this...


...Holla

Lil-trip 06-28-04 08:06 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by -SoLdIeR-
look son, i said i wanted sumin quik.... i said spit by 10 mins to the hour!!
how longs it take you to to write 5 bars?



you didnt respond right away, so i started another battle, when finished you where done yours..i don give a shit bout your time, n honestly next time take the extra time to write somethin decent, shit nigga is the UK runnin low on hip hop resources cus you need more hooks to bite nigga, thanks for the win tho, peace..

Lil-trip 06-29-04 12:04 AM

aight...
 
came in here n did my thing, n he did his...his didnt go down to well so lets hit a K-O on this cat n keep the honest love n battles goin..uppin holla

SkOtEe 06-29-04 07:21 AM

uppin....
uppin....
uppin....

lets get this over n done with!!

SkOtEe 06-29-04 07:45 PM

lets get this shit done, anyone vote!!

uppin...

LiL HoPPa 06-29-04 07:52 PM

lil trip gotz this, no hate, butz he had way better flow, punchs, and his rhymed tha whole time, soldier, alot of ur lines didnt rhyme. So my vote goez to Lil trip,.

SkOtEe 07-02-04 01:13 PM

uppin...
uppin...
uppin...

lets get this done with!!

Orijinal 07-02-04 01:21 PM

Lil-trip had better punches all the way thru..soliders yours were weak..u need to be more complex in your punchlines..both of u also need to pick up your vocabulary and make your flow better..good battle this is how it breaks down:

Opener: Lil-Trip
Closer: Lil-Trip
Punches: Lil-Trip
Personals: Soldier
Multies: None
Vocabulary: Tied
Structure: Lil-Trip
Flow: Lil-Trip

Vote-Lil-Trip
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Can yall both please vote honestly and professionally on this battle, we need votes i wanna end it already:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...920#post1380920

SparSin 07-06-04 09:17 PM

lol
 
Quote:
Originally Posted by Lil-trip
you didnt respond right away, so i started another battle, when finished you where done yours..i don give a shit bout your time, n honestly next time take the extra time to write somethin decent, shit nigga is the UK runnin low on hip hop resources cus you need more hooks to bite nigga, thanks for the win tho, peace..


your a trip lil.... lyterally... hey soldier he right tho.. throw harder punches but you a new b, trust me it takes a while to get used to this shit dont just give up... lil trip you had this... your punches just knocked him the fuck out...

BrOtHa-HoOd 07-12-04 05:22 AM

soldier your structure was wack n ur punches were weak n u need more punches, u had no metaz n hardly any wordplay u werent creative enuf either. the closer had gud intentions in it but the punch just wasnt there, personals were weak but could easy b improved

lil trip your structure was aight n it flowed, punches were weak but bet them of soldier opener n closer were weak, u need harder punches n to b more creative n use better wordplay instead of basic boring vocab.

v-lil trip

the god of rap 07-15-04 01:07 PM

im a fukin beats


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