New Improved Two Shot
 

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Listening now...

Beat is hot... Lovin this Hood Hop Beat... Wish i could produce like that : / LoL

Feed: WAYYY TOO CLOSE TO THE MIC.... back up.. and cop some nicer equipment...

Nice meta's/punches/wordplay tho... Gotta work on flow just a LITTLE bit... some of ya nice shit is forced or too slowwwww....

2nd verse... Kid need work on emotion, Flow, Lyrix... The whole works... Sound like he one of them ill text heads that came to audio and got kicked in the ass by it cuz he thought it was the same thing... hahaha, RUDE AWAKENING.... You need emotion doggy, Need to flow with rhythm... make me bob my head to ya lyrix not the beat...


Leave Feedback on minez:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132704

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iight good lookin

track was pretty good jus turn the volume down on your vocals an tighten up ya flow an you got a monster, was feelin' the punches good shit. return the favor peep my shit
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...256#post1379256

no doubt, i gotchu, good look dog

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feedback is nice

yo how do u get yur audio freestylez to tha soundclick.com cuz i made a track on audiocity rite but how do i get it on sounclick???holla back wun

register for a artist account when u go there

aight mayne i like dat shit mo fyah u from j.a huh? i was born in Trinidad... now live in queenz u kno but yo can u holla at my audio its called "hardwood class-sicks freestyle" ill up it so u can see it aight wun..

iight listenin now--- feelin the beat so far... first cat got a decent flow- the sound quality needs improvement like everyone elses here- sounds like you got the mic sensitivity too high or you spittin too close to the mic--- second cat is iight too-- both of you know what ya doin on the spittin tip-- the hook is iight too all in all not bad good luck cuz... check out The thread for Thirdself-- drop some feedback...1

yeah...def. feelin this beat...like man said before you a little too close to the mic..shit happens...just gotta work on that...ya flow is pretty nice..in some spots its rushed a little or forced...meta's and punches are cool...hook is cool...overall pretty good track...keep on droppin man..pz

I like that beat.The lyrics were not that good,especially that course.We could come better than that.The flow was alright.Delivery needs some work.Overall 4/10

iight good lookin