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ILLunatic 06-28-04 10:31 PM

I Thought I Lost You
 
This is legendary on a few sites i've posted it on, so I figured i'd post it here to see where it goes. Note this piece is about 3 months old.



I thought I lost you, So I let my heart fall through
Shouldn't have.. but I led myself to believe it was my fault too
I should have consulted you, but it didn't, now i'm the one to blame
At night I scream your name, as my heart burns to a flame
Life without you just aint the same, I need you
I pleed you, to come back 1 last time, so I can see you
I wish we wouldn't be through, is there anything I can do?
As I drop to my knees and hands to, I'll do your every little command too
Wow.. I didn't realize it, but your my heart and soul
You make my life complete and full. You're what makes it whole
Before I made some mistakes, that made our hearts break
Please come back, I beg of you for our relationships sake
Please just tell me this shits fake, and you didn't leave
When you left me, the pain inside you just woudn't believe
Your the love of my life, to me your a major loss to this universe
In life to me, you are first. Compared to anything, losing you is worst
But luckily, I didn't lose you, my conscience only went into play
But now i'm happy, because my life you came back into today
I'm happy as can be, that you're back with me..I love you
I just want you to know, that there is no one, i would put above you
See babe.. we're meant to be together, I can't live with out you
It still breaks my heart to think about when, I thought i lost you

ILLunatic 06-28-04 11:19 PM

Can I get some feedback in this..

t.B.k.S 06-29-04 12:00 AM

Delete This Freepost!

t.B.k.S 06-29-04 12:02 AM

Whoops... damn AOL made me post to soon. Anyways, this should be put in legends. It was exquizit.

Valor 06-29-04 02:51 AM

this was nice man....quite emotional i wanted to cry....lol
naw but it was good i enjoyed reading it homie...structure was good
and all....this was excellent

ILLunatic 07-01-04 01:38 AM

Ya'll some hoes.. theres ony been two replies

J. Luth 07-01-04 01:44 AM

that was some nice shit keepin it real i like that nice drop

ILLunatic 07-04-04 08:43 PM

*shakes head* Relaunched = groupies

Poppa Kap 07-04-04 08:49 PM

this was ok. Vocab pretty basic and the emotion was ok...which sites is this a legendary piece on?

ILLunatic 07-05-04 09:49 AM

Dont question me. And if you say Emotion was just "ok", you seriously need to learn how to read. This whole piece was emotional. And vocab isn't everything, pretty wack feedback that you give. Fuckin herb!

Poppa Kap 07-05-04 11:00 AM

what site was this legendary on? :)


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