Da Jokah Vs State CapiTol
 

aight mayne

rulez iz:
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explaine votes
u spit first
lets gooo..wun

checkin in nigga 1 hr aight mayne e.z nigga wun....

checkin in fam...lez do this..........................

Brutally Murder this wack bitch, Lines will disinograte Da JoKAH.......
raps are an ugly sight, Like watchin Fat Bastard Playin strip Poker.....

*gun Shots* Switch To KO Mode Ma fucka...

Choke you from a tree in "queenz" so you can say You "hang" In The Hood....
Kids Wack, Im a true super villian, my lyrics are the only thing that's good....
You aint spit-ten heat, Kids Bitin off 8 mile claimin' he from the streets....
Admit De-feat, Jokah Tried "Walkin In My Shoes" and Burnt-his-Feet....
Swollow My Rhymes, Leave you burnin from Simotanious Combustion....
Im Spittin' Ak-47's Like I Was Part Of The Rus-sians.......
He couldn't win this battle even if Nas wrote his shit for-him......
Kid You Beyond Wack, take your wack trash off this Forum.......
Like A sniper with no scope, this battle is out of your range.....
This Herb aint worth much, Like Loose Change..........
His name fits his description, this bitch is a straight Clown......
Claimin He Gangsta, In a Grey Wig rockin' a pink night gown.......
Detach your nose and shove it up your ass, so you can smell your lines......
couldn't get da message dat he's wack, N ive already sed it a million times....
Rockin a red Bandana, Dawg ill choke you with your own rag......
this piece of Shit "Lost" like luggage without a Name-tag..........
My Evolutional flow will blast you back to the past...........
Sometimes i sit and wonder how long your wackness is gonna last.......
It's Game Over, but i aint lil flip, My clips, will detach your hip....
Rhymes'll Blast You Away, Like Powerful Space Ships......


and it's over....only spit 22 cuz i did

aihgt nigga queenzz..

i'll run ya block ya chains n everythin in ya pock-ets,
n if u dwell inna mansion dont even botha tryna lock-it/
i'll catch u on ya front lawn n put some kneez-to-ya-ribs,
give u a kirby "right quick" n punk tha keyz-to-ya-crib/
n i culd care-less if u pumped n show off ya bare-chest,
but if u dont want leaks then i suggest u get a spare-vest/
ya styles bone dry how can u call yaself flavaz,
u dint "instigate" me cuz i kno whos brava/
toss me a mic somebody rip tha turn-tables,
i dont care if u signed cuz i kno howta burn-labels/
u dont bring enuff heat so i suggest u quit-rappin,
cuz i got rhymes n beats n im makin shit-happen/
i wuz allways mvp till ma coach-tripped,
he checked tha pocket in ma coat n found a pair of roach-clips/
but i dint stress,knowin that i had mad talents,
i can ball,beat box n rap now tha only problem iz balance/
how iz it i can do all these thingz at once,
plus smoke bluntz,fiddle wyt cunts n tryta hold ma front/
i gotta watch ma back cuz shitz gettin real hectic,
peeps tryta attack wen u off guard n least expect-it/
i jus laugh knowin half u cats iz bitch-mades,
i'll give u buttaflies in ya stomach wytta switch-blade/
gimme a chance i'll leave ya whole crew in body-casts,
i'll even save tha last dance before u hear tha shottie-blast/

e.z nigga wun..

uppin this muh fuckag..wun..

nice battle both emcees had nice flow and punches..jokah nice multis and u had a sick flow dawg, need sum personals but i like ur style..capitol nice verse, u had personals but not as hard hittin punches as jokah..no hate, good drop both of u
v/da jokah

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i was feelin the spits on both along with the queens n hangin wit the tree n hood linked well..

Not many multis but overall jokahs flo came consistent along with punches, more multis needed but not neccessary..didnt keep it basic n didnt overdo it votes with jokah..

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aight mayne thanx..uppin this muh fuckah aight dunt sleep..wun

Yo the battle was off the chain, STATE is always mErkin fools, but i didnt see him get dirty tonight like he usually does, JOka Showed up tonight and did his thang shit was tight no doubt....

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nice battle both emcees had nice flow and punches..jokah nice multis and u had a sick flow dawg, need sum personals but i like ur style..capitol nice verse, u had personals but not as hard hittin punches as jokah..no hate, good drop both of u

Not many multis but overall jokahs flo came consistent along with punches, more multis needed but not neccessary..didnt keep it basic n didnt overdo it votes with jokah..



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lol..damn this battle was one sided from the beginign... ima have to give this one to da joka... he came harder....and he had some hot punchlines fav line:i'll catch u on ya front lawn n put some kneez-to-ya-ribs,
give u a kirby "right quick" n punk tha keyz-to-ya-crib/
n i culd care-less if u pumped n show off ya bare-chest,
but if u dont want leaks then i suggest u get a spare-vest/
ya styles bone dry how can u call yaself flavaz,
u dint "instigate" me cuz i kno whos brava/

^^that was some nice shyt...

anyways ol you had an iight verse but it wasnt good enough to make you win the battle im sorry to say..you had decent punchlines..and decent flow but overall you really need to elevate

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uppin this shit..holla back wun......dont sleep niggas/

UPPIN THIS......it is now 0-0....lez go...............

alright......in my mind neither had a DAMNN! verse
J- you had a nice flow....your punches were good....ok personals
worplay was aight...struc was good...overall a good drop
i think you need to hit harder with your punches though

State- you had a nice flow...put you lacked in your punches..i think
you could of use MORE personals...wordplay was ok..struc was nice
but struc doesnt win battles...work on your punches

vote-Da Jokah