Da Jokah Vs Bk 2 Tha Future
aight mayne rules is:
U SPit First 5 to 30 lines no d.r crew or hate votes due 20 minz thats bout it lets do it wun |
checkn in nigga holla back wun 20 mins to spit..
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fuck spit in first lets checkin same time n spit
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aight mayne w.e 15 mins aight wun...due 2 30
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aight check then
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are you checkin or wut
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i already did homeboi..
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aight
sorry dawg no beef wit you but straight up fuck-a-blood\\ im frum Killafornia where that shit started queenz at where it be at, cuz\\ not my verse onpener but i had to say dawg no hate tho aight let get this shit started, your ryhmez stank like you ryhme out ya ass and farted\\ battlin' me shows that you wuz listening ta blk eyed peas and "got retarded"\\ nigga i stay a crime boss, you like gun play? then lets play clip toss\\ i honestly understand ya name you little clown runnin around wit make- up on just like a dame\\ you stupid for battlin me you think this game? then its officially over\\ tha mac will "flip" you "lil" ass, leave you red like rover\\ this kid loves to watch men bend over, if sum1 sayd my name wen you a sleep you would pop up like toast from a toaster\\ i do need a weapon, shit i'll beat yo ass wit tha holster,\\ ~watch for tha closer~ you like a blunt around a herb you gon get smoked, yo ass is better off at tha circus tellin jokes\\ |
a yo nigga its pastime 5 mins ta finish your versre or DQ
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aigh nigga ma bad m pc fucked up lets do it...
my rhymez iz scorchin like i guzzled a bottle of hot-sauce, i spread that writers block virus that'll leave ya thoughts-lost/ aint no cocks-or-mast-er-bat-ion wen im jackin-beats, aint gotta glock-to-blast-ya-face-in but im packin-heat/ i sold ma soul to rap,dedicate ma life-to-a-mic, attitude like dat will leave me lonely n turn ma wife-to-a-dyke/ thinkin ua supastar rockin them adidas, DMC can RUN,but u b jettin wen i pull my heatas/ like big L,i could leave u layin dead in a alley, but i'd be stuck in a cell,cuz i aint dealin wit tha federalies/ i'll blast u away in a black suit n a black ski mask, they b callin u short cake wen i blast out ya knee caps/ i stomp kids out like a key of coke, now ya qualities shit,dats why ya rhymes is broke/ i love my peice,but my favrit weapon still b my hands, knock u out wit ya own gun jus to please my fans/ or cut ya guts like u wuz in a sushi market, killa whales,fuckin my sales,allways b my shootin targets/ walkin round strutin ya shit like ya game tight, chuck told me to get ya bootfucked,n fuck ya bitch tha same night/(man-a-j-twa) fuck innocence i plead guil-ty, represent fa ma hood cuz they tha 1s who built-me/ n fuck them bitchass phony actas, i wach they lil episodes,then i clap afta/ ya new nick name b ford,cuz u b found-on-road-dead have henry turnin in his grave,wen i put tha pound-on-yo-head/ n jus remeba u only got 1 life,so dont risk-it, or ya last meal might just b a bis-kit/ queenz nigga .. |
uppin this dont sleep on it niggas aight
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Oh shit....
Bk 2 Tha Future- ya verse was decent....your punches nah they really didnt hit hard enough....you had an aight flow...but overall you did decent in this battle...but ayo yo structure was a little messed up...so overall nigga elevate... Da Jokah- your verse was nice...your punches were good to they connected and they hit hard too...your structure was decent...and you had a good flow...so overall Jokahgets my vote for better verse and punches.... v/Da Jokah |
bk to the future-- yours was ok... structure was wack as hell - ok flow.. decent punches--overall 65.5/100
jokah-nice punches---cool verse--strcutre wass hot and flowwin was all good jokah/vote HIT MY SIG UP PLZZ |
uppin diz muh fucl<ah
check ma otha battles too aight niggas |
aight uppin a yo jokah you got this one dawg ima rematch you latter tho
but good verse |
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