DOGGYDOGG69 VS PoEtIc JuStIcE
 

k rules r 20 lines max
no crew votes
no dickridin
no copyin verses

ill set up and u spit first :shoot:

yo
 

got ya name from snoop..thats ok coz u rap wit a girl-sound
in rap u a stray...so i guess u belong in the dawg-pound
i see your records started again from 0..claiming u a new-B
but fuck whats changed?..even wit 500 posts..u still aint a clue-G
what the fucks that with the 69??..how many times u try 4 crews?
nah, propably..how much i`ll get laughed at...if to YOU i lose
but that aint gon happen...coz u cudnt jump to my level if u woz SHAK
i make u moan more times than Kobi Tai..when she hve 1000 in the sack
i knock u head back and forth like it woz a game of ping-pong
jus like king-kong..u wnt be standing above me for too-long
after this jus like our records..me and u gona go seperate ways
even spittin last i guarantee,ur style will neva put a punch my way
wit ur swing and aim,u cant land a punch shot on my fair-way
my punches hit every G.I.R..maybe u can get the award for Fair-play
now u gona need hella more than 20 lines..i beat u wit 4 less
this all i got to say so hope ur style burns in hell...but god-bless

my spit
 

yo yo here it goes



Since when did you become “king” you must me wishin
Wait you are king, king of the weak you aint in my position
So that means I must be judgin you the weakest member of RB
This aint really hard to see, that ya level is way below me
Now your name is gonna fit you wen you leave you’ll be “old” history
Even if my talent rubbed off on you, you’ll still wont be as good as me
Now you use to not have faith but now you actually “believe”
That you are wack and that you have to finally leave
Thats a lie yo all ur fagget ass shits probably pre written
ur gonna need it goin up against me cuz ima give u a wippen
u aint so nice your actually wack
After this I aint gonna have sympathy but I’m just gonna turn my back

up................................................

Yo. This was a weak-ass battle.

Poetic Justice kicked it off with some decent wordplay and an OK flow, but then it just went downhill. Seems like it was half-assed.

Nonetheless, it was WAY better than Doggy Dogg. What the fuck was that, man?! That was a WEAK response. Nothing original, nothing inspired. You got shook.

WINNER: Justice

uuupppppppppppp
 

upin.....upin..................................... .........
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damn I need ya'll mafuckas to hurry up and close this battle out 4 me.....Its 3-0 me so far here is the link

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132586

you vote on mine I vote on your scouts honor!!!!!! Lol

upp
 

upin upin..............................................

well

dogg: ur shit was ok but ur punches made no sense at all
and they werent hittin hard
your structure was ok n flow was good
meta's,...eh..and u lacked multi's

poetic: u had the better verse
i could understand your punches
your personals were hittin harder
flow and structure was beeter

vote: poetic

i aint gon drop a poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133281

upin.............................................. ....

PoEtIc JuStIcE
structure was pretty good...good, stable flow...u had some metas...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

DoggyDogg69
puttin "" around ur words does not make it wordplay man...but anywho...structure was pretty good...flow fell off a little...u had a few metas...wordplay was simple and wack...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...neither had good personals...PoEtIc JuStIcE had the more stable flow...as well as more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...PoEtIc JuStIcE gets my vote for a better overall verse...

VOTE - POETIC JUSTICE

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...

A'ight...pretty weak battle...one sided for Poetic Justice fo real...........punches, flow, structure...everythin to Poetic...still, elevation is good for everyone. Dogg....not a terrible verse....could use some werk in the punches and personals department....Poetic a'ight personals too...Just elevate...both of you.

Vote- Poetic Justice

I'ma have to give this to potic justice he hade better flows and dd69 was O.K

he stole one of my wackest verse it was me(judge vs olkingcole) lol ur caught bitch

well you took half of the verse you ass whole

so my vote goes to poetic