killacam vs comershall
 

letsgo hoe

ayea im hea ta minipulate ya mind/ u couldnt come bak bustin nuts on spines/i challenge da earth with every word i ryme/ da fo five a leave ya assed smoked like a dime/da real type ta elaborate sicka/ my motha fukin bars encarcerate ni99as// so how dare u tryda battle da god /dis aint a game but i'll leave ya heart pulse wit a pause/im raw / u aint a mc ni99a so go dance/ u get flooded wit flow quika den lowlands/its no chance/ u couldnt beat me dawg/like a jew datin a blak youll neva see me NAH// i'll appear outa nowhere and start bustin// afta dis battle i wanna see ya balls tukin/its nuttin/ im mean on deez streets im da one ta go afta/ u shouldnt trust me like lilkids and dey pastures//i'll blastya//and leave ya ass wit no thought/decorate ya face wit da afta math a fo glocks/ BITCH!!

a killa cam whatup ni99a u finna no sho or what up dis shitttt

goddamn ni99a u still aint post holla at me if u aint finna post

Well this si bullshit get the other 2 battles closed....and...im guess im checking in ill drop tonight lastest tommorow since thee no rules

fukdat ni99a dem otha battles finna disinigrate soon or lata so juss post on this link & relax

Here it is weak verse but i WIN
 

Man first u need to match up to my rhyming quality standards//
On ur first ur talking some harsh words and using some Man Words//
Fam after i asked if u wanted to battle u sayed Not me Not Now//
After i spit my Killer rhymes u gonan be saying Why me Right Now//
Dogg,after tha battle you gonna go crying and doing a Fake Report//
Son,you coudlnt win if you had the Detriot Pistons Fan Support//
Fam im gonna slam these rhymes so hard,u walking off the Rucka//
Fam you better remember this "Black and Puerticans aint no Suckas//

one sided battle....comershall your verse was just pitiful...the structure killed your verse it was too basic you had no wordplay or hard punches everything was just too simple and basic...start writing your verses in lines not paragraph's cuz that wont help you win a battle...killacamflow your verse was decent not that hott but at least you made sense and used words that rhymed even tho your verse was mediocre...not basic but not complex some decent wordplay and a couple decent punches

comershall : 4/10

killacamflow : 6/10

vote: killacamflow

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killa cam got this one although it was a close battle sorry cam had hard hitting punches

aight this battle goes to com...cam...your verse sounded juss....blah...i cant even report on how bad that was....u needa do some serious elevatin fa real dun....i dont know wut happend...neitha verse was to good but at least cam had some punches that made since...
wordplay:com
opener:neitha
closer:neitha
multies:com
structure:cam

my vote goes to Comershall

i meant at least comershall had some punches that made since....my fault

..Upping this post let get these votes people i need this closed

killa better flow structure a lil more complex and better punches use more personals and vocab
com work on structure that will help ur flow work on vocab punches and personals
vote oobviously killa

one sided one sided... definitely killa took this.. corner ur verse sucked... killa took this with punches flow and structure..vote goes to killacam

sorry bad explanation... cornershall u had bad flow and structure.. ur verse wasnt good at all.... killa you came good with ur flow and structure i liked it... it was pretty hot i have seen u drop a hotter verse before but hey it got the job done... nice punches too.... but like i said killa u can do much better.. but sitll my vote goes to u