soldier vs lilchiofthachi
 

im ready when u is

u kno tha rules

aite, post by the hour then?? its nearly 1am here n im out soon man!

shit your offline, lets do this shit tomorrow then!

you ready for this??

what time you wanna drop ya shit?

shit man, k... drop ya 10 lines within 22 hours from now or forget it...

your slackin'

u spittin first so lets go dogg imma gonna wait on u

k,
10 lines
no recycling,
no crew votes


im'a kill this dude, he so stupid, he uses his face for a shield//
i'l punch the shit outa him cos he bites his lines, like tyson outa holyfield//
this 13 yr old playa aint getin no whores or groupies, he getin kinda lonely//
got desperate for some the other day so tried to score like Kobe!//
your name ses it all your lil.. you dont want no big boys beef//
ur spittin ya shit, but ya dribblin too wit ya "lil" baby teeth!//
i'll rip you killas to "lil" pieces without breakin a sweat//
i'l rob ya ass of ya life and you'd still be in my debt//
this dude wanna jack ma ring, but not the one on my finger or my thumb//
hes only ever been in one pussy and that was his fukin' mums//

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754

Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win....

Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=(

lilchi, you ever guna post ya shit??

what are you doin....

u prolly tryin put UK on tha map,but be able 2 live that long cause of little misshap/
it took me a while 2 spit cause i didnt want 2 leave u embarassed,u a ho u make more videos then Paris/u tryin 2 rep G-Unit u should cause u look like Lloyd Banks,lips look like tha tires on a tank/so i guees u tha king of Uk,but u weak so aint nobody gonna listen 2 wat u say/if i was a skateboarder i caould be grindin,on ya linen,so bitch quit ur whinin

soldeir
im'a kill this dude, he so stupid, he uses his face for a shield//
i'l punch the shit outa him cos he bites his lines, like tyson outa holyfield//
if he bit he'd be banned. fake personal 2/10
this 13 yr old playa aint getin no whores or groupies, he getin kinda lonely//
got desperate for some the other day so tried to score like Kobe!//
Kobe-played. 1/10
your name ses it all your lil.. you dont want no big boys beef//
ur spittin ya shit, but ya dribblin too wit ya "lil" baby teeth!//
weak punch. 2/10
i'll rip you killas to "lil" pieces without breakin a sweat//
i'l rob ya ass of ya life and you'd still be in my debt//
this was ok. 4/10
this dude wanna jack ma ring, but not the one on my finger or my thumb//
hes only ever been in one pussy and that was his fukin' mums//
last line kinda playe 3/10

This was average. You could have done better. You came a little played in most cases. Work on your creativity and harder punches.
12/50

lil
fix the structure.
u prolly tryin put UK on tha map,
but be able 2 live that long cause of little misshap/
personal. weak punch 2/10
it took me a while 2 spit cause i didnt want 2 leave u embarassed,
u a ho u make more videos then Paris/
funny. creative. 5/10
u tryin 2 rep G-Unit u should cause u look like Lloyd Banks,
lips look like tha tires on a tank/
personal. blah. 2/10
so i guees u tha king of Uk,
but u weak so aint nobody gonna listen 2 wat u say/
UK second time. 1/10
if i was a skateboarder i caould be grindin,on ya linen,
so bitch quit ur whinin
doesnt make sense. 1/10
You need alot of work especially on your structure. The way I fixed it is the way it should look. Your verse was to simple. Your one line wit paris was funny, but still a tad to short on detail. No hate just helping.
11/50

Vote/Soldier

Hit my battles in my sig wit honest votes.

uppin....

uppin....

get us a winner on this!!

soldier took this one..........................................

v=soldier

Soldier took this one cuz he had better structure and punches..I think lil chi gotta work on his structure cuz his was all over the place. Soldier didnt have much metas though but so did lil chi. And that debt line killd lil chi.

Vote - soldier

Vote on these:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134177

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134111

yo soldier won.....he had more personals and if i can give chi any advice itd be GET A STRUCTU"RE.......elevate both f you....liek the holyfield lnie tho...........return the fav o n my battles v/solf=dier