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Limited Edition (I.I) Vs. Poetic Justice (D2R) Topical
[COLOR=DarkSlateGray]A'ight... ]House Rules Check in. 20 Lines Minimum. 100+ Posts to Vote. Drop Due by Sunday 11:59PM. Good Luck to Both. Topic: You Are One Lord of the Rings Character[/COLOR |
erm.the topic sucks..arnt we supposed to both agree b4 we set up????.........
i aint seen that shit b4....change the topic to sumthin more accsesable 4 both of us... murder,suicide,love,hate,deppression,guilt,paintin a picture.ANYTHIN but a film....uve prob seen it 25 times......n seen as the rules wernt agreed b4 u set it up...i want it changing......... |
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actually.........fuck it leave it as it is....i was under the impression u woz a vet....but hvin peeped a couple of ur topicals...i cud beat them freestyle.....
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^^^Are you serious? Or are you talking shit? I will actually try in this topical then.
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serious.n i wnt try............................................... .....................................
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Frodo Baggins The Council I have completed the task given to me...my job is done A few days seemed like years...was constantly on the run I look over...see Sam hiding by a bush......what a friend Merry and Pippin behind the pillars...up to no good again Gandalf sits next to me...he's the grandfather I never had Why wasn't Bilbo here..? The closest perosn I have to a Dad... On the table of stone...sitting in the very center of the room The small object...evil, created by Sauron...forged in Mt. Doom The One Ring.........its evil pull brought us all here together... Elrond is talking...deciding...what to do with it...its taking forever Boromir stands...he requests the Ring...a weapon for Gondor But the last time it was in a man's hands...how long was it gone for? Strider...across the room...explains no man can wield it... Argument...Legolas tells the name Aragorn...Boromir can't beleive it Elrond says...it was obvious...the Ring must be destroyed But the periless journey...is one most would want to avoid Gimli the Dwarf...stands up...and insults Legolas the elf... It was funny...he couldn't be taller if he stood on a shelf... But things heat up...the whole room is in a raging debate There is a voice inside my head...how much more can I take? My head begans to hurt...I clench my fists and close my eyes... The vision becomes clear...I must do it...and to everyone's surprise... I glanced at the Ring...Sauron's voice rings again...I hate it... I Stand up...Walk forward............................"I Will Take it...." |
Uppin' for Poetic to see...hopefully he'll drop early.
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nice spit...........ima drop sumtime in tha nxt couple hours.....hvnt started yet......
i aint seen this film b4 so.....im gona chk it out first.... |
^^^Shit, you havent seen the movie? A'ight but if you watch it should give you an idea...
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smegal...two towers
ok...i am writing about..THE TWO TOWERS...i am Smegal/Gollum
alone at night, starlight, cursing i search...two little thieves
somethin trips in my head...a transition between good and evil...mystically drawn, not caring about the rustling of the leaves the ring is my goal,blinded by envy and uncompromising greed like a cat drawn to feed...i must cause these thieves to bleed as i strike..unknowingly...hobbits sleep easy and i them awoke quickly i am captured,i feel guilt as a sword is held to my throat strangely now calm and peacefull...why is this happening to smegal? i feel unjustifiable sadness as the rope twists and burns..... i just want to be set free..they are my friends..on them i wont turn.. i want them to trust me...yet i know im unrelliable..schitzofrenic i long to be freed..from my alta ego..panic..and crazy psycho-manic please..i know the way to moldor..i can lead you to the black gate i want to help..avoiding treachury...i hope this journey isnt my fate... alone trembling..hiding from the voice in my head.... get out of there i said..i want to be friend not foe instead.. drawn to the ring as they sleep..overcome with greed i rise to my feet but fight i must...i can conquer this lust..and im not about to be defeat painfull scornfull fight,...but mentally this pain is deep in my head.. i long to get rid of...this time i only just manage to overcome the dread.. what do i want...who is stronger..am i gollumn?..or smegal???... well that debate could go on foreva..like EM or Royce?..bad or evil? |
uppin for poetics crazy topical given the circumstance that was
real hot poetic real nice .......damn that was hot!!!!! |
hmm.. both were good..
limited:it was good, but your flow was off alil bit in some places.. but it was good overall..good job poetic:i would have never thought to do smeagel on this topic hehe..this is what won this to you,,in my opinion.. the creativity shown..it was more the creativity of the write who made smeagel, but it was creative to choose him..good job.. no hate vote Limited. I just felt the topic he was rhyming about a lil more.. smeagel is my fav character lol.... v/poetic |
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yo this topical yall both did yall thang for real big up to both yall...
limited had me caught up for a minute with the names he described the whole shit...mad crazy yo.......yo was watchin the flick serious i can tell justice just tapped into the mind of ol boi and just released all the emotion i felt that.......good shit my vote is/poetic though hers just had more intensity and feeling and she just devoured the topic yo... |
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