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QBsmasher 06-30-04 01:54 PM

QBsmasher vs DangerousMyndLunatic
 
Aight both verses are due in 20 minutes.

10 lines min 20 max
N/Recycling
N/crew
N/biting

GL

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-30-04 01:58 PM

10Lines MAXIMUM' .... I Done Told You Don't Get It Twisted Boi' ..

You Droppin First Since You Called Me Out' ..!!!! - ..

You Cool With That? Because If Not This Battle Is Over With

QBsmasher 06-30-04 01:59 PM

I made the post, I set it up, your goin 15-20 lines. and ill drop first. then you got 20 min.

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-30-04 02:01 PM

It's 10Lines Maximum 5Lines Minimum.. Wanksta' ... Get It Straight' ...!!!!

QBsmasher 06-30-04 02:03 PM

go 15 max and we will do it, that 5-10 is too lil.

QBsmasher 06-30-04 02:05 PM

at least post something that has a lil content....

QBsmasher 06-30-04 02:07 PM

Im on top of the charts, you arent around
And I know that chest aint holdin ya down
So your smart and read books, equipped with good looks
Sad to say broads like you dont even make good cooks
So youve got twenty losses what would you do for twenty-one
Why dont you tell em about the pm, asking if you could rent me hun
Im a teen, human being, ripping machine
And it seems, youll be seeing, this first handed scheme
My rhymes are endless, youd say i have a miriad
The only thing you have consistent is your period
Youll be tryin to hop on my dick, cause you know im stayin
I wouldnt call you sister, if our last names were wayans
She says shes so nice, why she still aint got a break
Is a bigger question than, is britneys tits fake?

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-30-04 02:27 PM

Checckity Checck.. Checck!!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-30-04 02:44 PM

Checck This Shit: ...

Do You Think QB Suck's I'll Poll The Audience...!!!

Your First Criminal Offence Was Waisting My Time,
Acting Like You Got Game, You're Guilty Dont Lie,
Your Second Offence Was Failure Of Style,
Lack'n Sufficient Substance, Except What u Smoke Out Of Ur Vial,
Plus You Don't Debate The Fact That Your Gay?,
Call The Homo-Police To Come And Take You Away,
It's Juvenile For You To Continue This Battle,
Pussy Ass Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And Tattle,
To Another Beating, You Should Consider Attending an A.A Meeting,
Either You'r Stupid or high, You Need To Catch Up On The Reading,
Man Like There Is Still Hope For Cats Like 'You',
Stop Frontin, Be True I Aint Saying Nothing New?
Getin 'Jiggy With It' Every Time You Get Raped?
Drinking Wont Give u A Clean Slate Stop Takin Dick At Any Given Rate

End Of Part 1
Blah Its Over With.. That Is All Because What You Wront Was Poor And Beyond 'Disbelief', Typical Trash Who's Hooked On Booze And Reef, Borderline Of Being Pushed On To The Cold Lonely Streets..!!!

[♡]_Fuck_you_ho 06-30-04 02:47 PM

Upppppin For Votes.......................................


wrot .. = Wrote**

RapMisstress 06-30-04 05:48 PM

I like Dangerous drop. QB didn't come hard enough, not enough punches.

CueBall 06-30-04 06:41 PM

Im on top of the charts, you arent around
And I know that chest aint holdin ya down
So your smart and read books, equipped with good looks
Sad to say broads like you dont even make good cooks
So youve got twenty losses what would you do for twenty-one
Why dont you tell em about the pm, asking if you could rent me hun
Im a teen, human being, ripping machine
And it seems, youll be seeing, this first handed scheme
My rhymes are endless, youd say i have a miriad
The only thing you have consistent is your period
Youll be tryin to hop on my dick, cause you know im stayin
I wouldnt call you sister, if our last names were wayans
She says shes so nice, why she still aint got a break
Is a bigger question than, is britneys tits fake?

nice shit....Let's see what she got...

Do You Think QB Suck's I'll Poll The Audience...!!!

Your First Criminal Offence Was Waisting My Time,
Acting Like You Got Game, You're Guilty Dont Lie,
Your Second Offence Was Failure Of Style,
Lack'n Sufficient Substance, Except What u Smoke Out Of Ur Vial,
Plus You Don't Debate The Fact That Your Gay?,
Call The Homo-Police To Come And Take You Away,
It's Juvenile For You To Continue This Battle,
Pussy Ass Momma's Boy, Just Run Home And Tattle,
To Another Beating, You Should Consider Attending an A.A Meeting,
Either You'r Stupid or high, You Need To Catch Up On The Reading,
Man Like There Is Still Hope For Cats Like 'You',
Stop Frontin, Be True I Aint Saying Nothing New?
Getin 'Jiggy With It' Every Time You Get Raped?
Drinking Wont Give u A Clean Slate Stop Takin Dick At Any Given Rate

End Of Part 1
Blah Its Over With.. That Is All Because What You Wront Was Poor And Beyond 'Disbelief', Typical Trash Who's Hooked On Booze And Reef, Borderline Of Being Pushed On To The Cold Lonely Streets..!!!

also some nice shit.....


i was feelin QB jus a tad more. He gets my vote. pc-1

Judge. 06-30-04 07:13 PM

Openor: Dangerous
Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Personals: Dangerous
Punches: dangerous
Vote: Dangerous

*The~Star* 06-30-04 07:14 PM

QBsmasher

Ok,your verse was basically about her being a female.And you played most,if not all your punches on that,which was not a good thing.Your punches were not that good.So next time you battle a female,you shouldn't focuz so much on her sex,naw mean.Throw some punches that you could throw to a male or female,naw mean.Your flow was cool.Your verse was to focus on her sex to me.
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Dangerous

Your verse was cool.You had a little bit of wordplay in there.Your punches were cool.Your flow wasn't all there.You had a nice lil verse.
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My vote goes to Dangerous for having a overall better verse.Holla at my battle

QBsmasher 06-30-04 08:52 PM

Oh well 3-2 uppin for more votes...


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