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Poison(0-0) vs. Daclassic(0-0)
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battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm western check in on Tuesday verses due on JULY 7wedsday votes due by the next saturday rules: no dick riding no crew votes no freeposting more then three times your dq'd no feeding off of other guys verse up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd bar limits: 4 line min. 16 line max. |
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damn i gotta battle him on my first one? |
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The Classic LCB Debut
Now this is the beginning Of something special My Debut and You'll are all welcome Look, Nobody knows you, And your not even close to getting attention I bet this battle we got goin, Is the first time your life was mentioned Pay attention, I got your terrrorist acts under surveillance so quick The only time you got ill intentions is when feeling you about to get sick This prik in this battle will get 15 minutes of fame, And fade like denim I'll put the pain up in him, He poisonous please! No containment of venom Look he shook, I took the time I wasted, And placed it in bars and hooks I'll fry cook this rook with two lines of rhymes compared to his verse of books Poison, How you pussy whipped, Over some gushy shit, Your brother picked Another dick that done tossed and flipped a trick that you loved and sticked I done had it, With a faggot, Me and you can't be placed in the same viscinity When you claiming you hard, At the same time asking who lost their virginity You is an easy victory, No beef for me? I can't see no comment offending me Poll sending me poison, I'm the vaccine to destroy this ridicoulous enemy Quote:
The BluePrint Holla....!!!aaaaaah!!lol |
I'll waste an up f.ck it......aaaaaaaah!!!lol
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Daclassic is simalar to a musical instrument somethin like a banjo...
Except he a human being gettin played by Vango... Now take a minute to think, an lets get fa real... You could get a 100 wins an still wouldn get a deal... Internet rappin, thinks hes a classic, u really have no skill... If u had tha IQ of a genius ud be in tha rap game makin plenty of bills... He says hes no homo, i think you got it all wrong... Cus DML told me you like to try on her thongs... Wut a tragic its gon be how ima kill daclassic... Burn em wit acid, then wrap his body in plastic... Then send his head to his mom in tha mail in a basket... Cut em into pieces so he has to have 10 different caskets... fuck it im done, this shit was wack. |
uppin for votes
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uppin....where the fuck are the votes............
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daclassic:this was a good verse.. the lines were a little long, but it was good.. flow was decent, vocab was good, and personals were there... i belived he pretty much came with it.. 8/10 verse overall..
poison: it seemed like you rushed this verse, and you, especially since you did it at the last minute lol.. this verse was overall a 6/10.. could have been a lot better.. no hate. v/Daclassic |
all man none taken, i jus didn feel like battlein at all an i kno it was garbage.
still uppin....................... |
aight heres the breakdown:
Poison had his screwed up because of his flow, i guess it could be true that he rushed this, he had some decent punches, that make that some GOOD punches, but there aint nothin special, he lacks personal too, yes, could've been a lot better. Daclassic has a pretty well structured verse, he had nice wordplay, better flow, and the nice closer with that quote, he pretty much crushed poison with his verse so i'ma vote for daclassic vote: Daclassic |
AIGHT IMA BREAK IT DOWN
DACLASSIC IN MY EYEZ U GOT THIS ONE YOUR VOCAB WAS ON LOCK YOUR STRUCTURE WAS A LIL OFF BUT THATS AIGHT YOU PERSONAL'S WERE GOOD PUNCHES WERE PRETTY GOOD TO WORD PLAY WAS GOOD SO OVERALL I THINK U WON THIS poison this was ok for you i expected u to come much harder i know about didnt feel like battlen i get that sometimez to your punches were ok flow was bad didnt have many hard hiting personal's no vocab word play none but u might have rushed like u said overall vote~DACLASSIC |
KO daclassic wins 3-0...battle closed
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