Forgotten Flow(0-0)vs. Orijinal(0-0)
 

deadlines:
battles go up sunday night around 10:00 pm western
check in on Tuesday
verses due on JULY 7wedsday
votes due by the next saturday
rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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checkin in..good luck

Dropppin' mines a BIT early.

Forgotten Flow, yes, U ’forgot’ 2 bring yo ‘flow’ when you battled the Great/
Nigga, I’ll cut you into half like a cellphone goin’ after mail-in rebate/
Right now, I just need to drop a simple verse to make my way to the top/
Ya shit is all fuckin used and played, like ya rhymes owned a Pawn Shop/
Kid think he hot n got lyrics because he part of a strong ass rap crew/
He gon die soon ‘cuz my M16 will make a red dot on yo 4-head like U was Hindu/
As a tradition, I let battlers tattoo my name when I beat ’em, so put 1 on ya belly/
Try to be like me, it’ll never happen like Chinatown sellin’ real Burberrys/
Is 12 lines, I already killed ya, think I should stop? Nah, I wanna slaughter da ‘flow’/
This guy will never come close to me, even if he was my own shadow/
Let me put this ‘freeloader’ in a freestyle house maybe he’ll learn how 2 spit/
Nah, it’ll never happen, just save ur time, put a word then click ‘Submit’/
I’m the main event, I’m the starrin’ playa while you in a beaver suit as a mascot/
Your raps is like a Nelly music video, you need bangin bitch 2 make it hot/
16 Lines, 8 Bars, damn, that’s all it took to make a dude’s life to be ended/
The only way this guy could only win in this battle, is if I got mysteriously suspended/


“Freeloader-Freestyle House” - Because his occupation is a freeloader.

this guy calls hiself original, but we all knows that he lies,
cause after this battle, he gonna mold his style to be mine,
This kid has no chance of winnin, I'm bout to even his stats,
so his pussy 3-2 record, the kid'll be evenin that,
I'm bout to eat this noobs brains, like I was hannibal lecter,
The Punchline King has took a step down to battle the Jester,
And he think he actually got a shot at winnin, dont press ya luck,
Like I'm supposed to come out hard battlin MC McDuck,
dont cry yet bitch, what you cant handle my words,
don't even need to spit metaphors, I could rip you wit a verb,
Apotheosis said you would win and got ya hopes up too high,
cause Duke's one of the best, and you're one of the worst on the site,
see ya lines are too streched, and ya punches is too weak,
so battlin the all mighty Yung Duke, you dont even deserve to speak,
So close ya mouth, cause thinkin you can hang wit me is livin in sin,
cause even if i no showed I probably still wouldve got the win...
~Yung Duke~

uppppppppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Uppin

Uppin

honored to vote...hahahaha

at first i thought Orijinal's verse was a little stretched....it still is, but then i found out the punches was pretty good.....the verse, although, the opener was played, but there was some decent punches, the closer was aight, had good wordplay and personals

4got10 flow has a better structured verse, he has better flow, and better punches, etc

both of you came pretty weak, but i'ma vote for Forgotten Flow because his verse had wittier punches, both of yall lacked personals

Vote: Forgotten Flow

this was an ok battle

forgotten flow
you had better strucutre .. witch made ur verse flow better..
you had fair punches witch hit harder than orijinalzoverall
7/10

orijinal
u had wack strucutre with bad flow and played mostly punches

ur punches werent hiting hard.. you just came to weak...
6.5 / 10
my vote:
forgottenflow

dope I was mentioned in Forgottens verse lol. Erm..

Reasons I liked Originals verse...had some complexity.

Reasons I didnt like Originals verse.....flow wasnt good and the lines were fuckin streeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeetched. Also you came pretty played & ur best line is just a flop from a Llyoyd Banks lines.

......I'll put a red hole in between ur eyes like its part of ur religion"(along those lines)

& ur "Kid think he hot n got lyrics because he part of a strong ass rap crew/
He gon die soon ‘cuz my M16 will make a red dot on yo 4-head like U was Hindu/"

isnt a bite but it shows it aint original.

Flow :)..flow was good, basic but more original punches, personals about his strected lines

Flow :(...too basic. U didnt come that hard.

but u got this because u were original & you had better flow.

Vote=Forgotten

originals verse was stretched but he had wordplay and metaphors and forgottoflow forgot all those, his only punches were self glorification and thats not good.
if self glorification outbeats wordplay and metaphors- flow wins
if having wordplay and metaphors and none selfglorifing punches count- original wins

^^^ I would say somethin bout that, but why care, I won

Orijinal Yo Structure Was Fucked and Stretched Punches Really Didnt Connect And Personals was weak....

Bestline-Forgotten Flow, yes, U ’forgot’ 2 bring yo ‘flow’ when you battled the Great/
Nigga, I’ll cut you into half like a cellphone goin’ after mail-in rebate/

8/10

Overall verse 6/10

Flow

bestline

I'm bout to eat this noobs brains, like I was hannibal lecter,
The Punchline King has took a step down to battle the Jester,

9/10 pretty dope
flow wins...