JPoll(0-0) vs. gotaasswhoopin4U(0-0)
 

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rules:
no dick riding
no crew votes
no freeposting more then three times your dq'd
no feeding off of other guys verse
up your battle more than three times in a row your dq'd
bar limits:
4 line min.
16 line max.

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i wasnt on yesterday, lol, howd i end up wit u ....check....

i'm done editing please vote now

jpolls an idiot, that can go without bein said...
he sets the beef thread, then gets at me via pm...
kid please u think u gotta chance of beatin me...
put down the blunt i think ur seein too much of that canadian weed...
he keeps his jokes limited, hes scared to push me...
his avatar lets everyone kno hes pussy...
ur a student...it looks like its time for ur spellin lesson...
its "im so pussy" u tryna forget the s' (look at his title)....
he talks a good game, but hes scared of original heads...
he cant deny it, he was scared to come back to this thread...
this fag aint pick this outta a hat, he cant leave the kid alone...
he never dropped nuttin real, he gotta verse full of silicone...
polls gotta be wylin, sayin i aint got no talent...
hes beggin to be friends, hes in a crew named after my favorite rappers album(jay z - blueprint)...
now let daclassics nuts breathe and admit i took this battle wit ease...
its a shame u gettin served in ur own fuckin league

haha wow elementary...jokes...goodluck...uppin...

You guys came weaker than I expected. I was looking forward to this battle but it was a disapontment.

Gota's the reason rb will forever get clowned
He's like iron Mike speaking
.............intelligent thoughts are never found
an average opener. Not very complex or witty...it wasnt anything special

I'm going easy on him usin a mallet instead of my sledge hammer
what else can i say to a kid
................................who doesn't have grade school grammer
erm...should of used a different approach to this grammar line to make it more hard or witty. But it was ok, again it was basic.

Whatever fuck him I'm the champ like Greece in the Euro Cup
And he's like Bizarre after 2 sit ups
..............................................he just could never get up
this wasnt good. Its not the same as biting but writing a similar line and using it for a punch is gay.

He's got more losses then wins yet he's claimin to be the best
Come ON Kid that's like eve claimin
......................................shes got the worlds largest chest
was ok.

This kids certifiably wack yet in every thread he's yelling'I'm Fine"
But you'll see the only tight wrapping he does
..............................................is right before christmas time
WOAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH PLAYED.


jpolls an idiot, that can go without bein said...
he sets the beef thread, then gets at me via pm...
didnt rhyme well and wasnt strong.

kid please u think u gotta chance of beatin me...
put down the blunt i think ur seein too much of that canadian weed...
basic but ok.

he keeps his jokes limited, hes scared to push me...
his avatar lets everyone kno hes pussy...
this was decent, at least u played off his profile.

ur a student...it looks like its time for ur spellin lesson...
its "im so pussy" u tryna forget the s' (look at his title)....
this was ite again, it was directed well at him.

he talks a good game, but hes scared of original heads...
he cant deny it, he was scared to come back to this thread...
not feelin this greatly.

this fag aint pick this outta a hat, he cant leave the kid alone...
he never dropped nuttin hot, he gotta verse full of silicone...
basic.

polls gotta be wylin, sayin i aint got no talent...
hes beggin to be friends, hes in a crew named after my favorite rappers album(jay z - blueprint)...
there is so many better ways to diss the name of his crew and this was one was a bit rookie like.

now let daclassics nuts breathe and admit i took this battle wit ease...
its a shame u gettin served in ur own fuckin league
erm an ok closer...but basic again.

Ive seen both of u drop much better, it was a shame because I was expecting this as one of the best.

I will giv this to gotta because at least a couple of his lines were based on his actual opponent. I feel Jpolls lines cud be aimed at anyone......

Vote Gotta.

ehhh...that silicone was fyucked up...i meant u never dropped nuttin real...damn

Jpoll......pmed me because he added some more lines 2his verse........disregard my above verse and ill vote agen later.....busy now

^^^ i wasn't finished editing my verse...but i am done now...so votes please...

oh...ill edit mine

I still stand by my vote......Jpoll.....theres a difference between edditing and adding 4 more lines.

This kids all on supremes dick crying about how he didn't steal lines...
What i can't believe is how this kid got 5 votes 7 times

He reps wackness while i rep the owners of this site
the kids 7 and 11 because he's whoring out wins all night

^they werent there when I first peeped ur verse. That shit is pretty gay 4 real.

Alright thanks for the vote...but they weren't in my verse because i keystyled my verse and then edited it with 4 more lines...ah well whatever 1-0 for gotaa.

Gota's the reason rb will forever get clowned
He's like iron Mike speaking, intelligent thoughts are never found
This was a pretty basic bar-- Mike Tyson/Intelligence jokes, you killed the multi by stickin "get" in the first line, and clowned and found aren't very difficult rhymes-- 5/10
I'm going easy on him usin a mallet instead of my sledge hammer
what else can i say to a kid who doesn't have grade school grammer
first line was a pretty decent setup... second line wasn't great but decent- it's "grammar" by the way.- 7/10
Whatever fuck him I'm the champ like Greece in the Euro Cup
And he's like Bizarre after 2 sit ups he just could never get up
First line is a decent setup again, through a similie in there- but again you killed your multi and rhyming Up with Cup isn't very difficult.- 7/10
sayin your damn ill well that's what it makes feel to read your verse
You rap like ice cubes in the sun, all raps hotness is dispersed
this was probly the best bar I've seen from you- decent punch- 7.5/10
He reps wackness while i rep the owners of this site
the kids 7 and 11 because he's whoring out wins all night
this bar was just upsetting... I know Gotta isn't known as "The Dopest" on the site, and I think up to this point in your verse you've been counting on that... I've seen you come alot harder than this- site and night is the rhyme, decent personal the setup is o.k I guess... 7/10
He's got more losses then wins yet he's claimin to be the best
Come ON Kid that's like eve claimin shes got the worlds largest chest
This is better... Nice personal diss on the setup- Good punchline, this had some humour to it... 8/10
This kids all on supremes dick crying about how he didn't steal lines...
What i can't believe is how this kid got 5 votes 7 times
I wish you rhymed with some multi's in this verse because a multi would have made this closer snap nice... As it is its got some humor but It reads kinda choppy- 7/10

jpolls an idiot, that can go without bein said...
he sets the beef thread, then gets at me via pm...
This was a funny personal here... bein said and pm might sound good when you say it, I didn't give Jpoll the benefit though so I won't give it to you- so I'll say forced multi- 7/10
kid please u think u gotta chance of beatin me...
put down the blunt i think ur seein too much of that canadian weed...
The second line kinda stretches, but its a decent punch- 7/10
he keeps his jokes limited, hes scared to push me...
his avatar lets everyone kno hes pussy...
easy multi, its an attempt at a personal, just not really feelin it-- 7/10
ur a student...it looks like its time for ur spellin lesson...
its "im so pussy" u tryna forget the s' (look at his title)....
lmao- this was a good personal... it rhymes well- creative.... 8.5/10
he talks a good game, but hes scared of original heads...
he cant deny it, he was scared to come back to this thread...
nice use of the link- decent diss- o.k setup-- 7.5/10
this fag aint pick this outta a hat, he cant leave the kid alone...
he never dropped nuttin real, he gotta verse full of silicone...
decent multi, The punch aint too hard though equating fake with silicone is a basic similarity- decent verse... 7/10
polls gotta be wylin, sayin i aint got no talent...
hes beggin to be friends, hes in a crew named after my favorite rappers album(jay z - blueprint)...
lol- this was funny- the line stretched again so it deducts, but nice punch-- 7/10
now let daclassics nuts breathe and admit i took this battle wit ease...
its a shame u gettin served in ur own fuckin league
kinda weak closer... it flows o.k and It's a personal diss but I think some wordplay or multi woulda made this better... 6.5/10

I think on most given Days Poll woulda left with the win, but I think you just under-estimated him in this battle, your rhyme scheme was severely basic, and you didn't come with too many intense punches-- I felt like gottasswhoopin had a problem with his structure, but your rhymes were just too choppy with out enough support... Vote GottaAsswhoopin4U

Gota's the reason rb will forever get clowned
He's like iron Mike speaking, intelligent thoughts are never found
^^aight opener, not really feeling it though......
I'm going easy on him usin a mallet instead of my sledge hammer
what else can i say to a kid who doesn't have grade school grammer
^^good punch, second line is a little played,
Whatever fuck him I'm the champ like Greece in the Euro Cup
And he's like Bizarre after 2 sit ups he just could never get up
^^funny punch, good use of current events and music video
sayin your damn ill well that's what it makes feel to read your verse
You rap like ice cubes in the sun, all raps hotness is dispersed
^^this is a pretty good punch, well, i like it
He reps wackness while i rep the owners of this site
the kids 7 and 11 because he's whoring out wins all night
^^aight personal
He's got more losses then wins yet he's claimin to be the best
Come ON Kid that's like eve claimin shes got the worlds largest chest
^^this is some funny shit, this is a good punch
This kids all on supremes dick crying about how he didn't steal lines...
What i can't believe is how this kid got 5 votes 7 times
^^this is an decent closer, nice personal.....

jpolls an idiot, that can go without bein said...
he sets the beef thread, then gets at me via pm...
^^this is a good opener, nice personal
kid please u think u gotta chance of beatin me...
put down the blunt i think ur seein too much of that canadian weed...
^^second line is stretched, played......
he keeps his jokes limited, hes scared to push me...
his avatar lets everyone kno hes pussy...
^^decent personal, a little off on the flow
ur a student...it looks like its time for ur spellin lesson...
its "im so pussy" u tryna forget the s' (look at his title)....
^^good personal, funny line
he talks a good game, but hes scared of original heads...
he cant deny it, he was scared to come back to this thread...
^^ok punch, using the thread
this fag aint pick this outta a hat, he cant leave the kid alone...
he never dropped nuttin real, he gotta verse full of silicone...
^^good use of multi.......
polls gotta be wylin, sayin i aint got no talent...
hes beggin to be friends, hes in a crew named after my favorite rappers album(jay z - blueprint)...
^^strtched lines, the punch was ok
now let daclassics nuts breathe and admit i took this battle wit ease...
its a shame u gettin served in ur own fuckin league
^^aight closer......

Gota was a little messed up at the flow but he was funny, but i have to vote for JPoll because his flow was better, and i'm feeling his verse more, and it was more funny, beside his opener, his verse was good

vote: JPoll