juss a lil' somethin (Tryin' to improv my writin' skillz so plz tell me wut youthink
 

I'm new and juss tryin' to get better at writing so plz tell me wut you think and wut I can do or need to do to get better. :help:


Itz dat highly contagious tha one known as Mr. amazing/
I can bring tha drama to face hatin' niggaz mad cuz I'm str8 laced/
I'm tha one like Neal but I destroy tha Matrix in a whip wit 22's to skate wit/
My flowz sick like a piranha trust worthy like a honda my skillz go far beyond ya/
I'm bringin' tha pain got ya holleren my name T-Bo has done it again/
A hollow tip gangsta U can't fuck wit me tha type of nigga you don't wanna make ya enemy/
Like Ric Roc I drop trax dat are hot I'm a young Doug E. Fresh tha new Human beat box/
I Bill Gates my enemies tha type to take over ya bloc and then destroy it to up my stock/
Look apon a star and make a wish dat maybe one dat U can be as good as dis/
Even before rap I wuz makin' moves everday checkin' my to do list cuz tha streetz iz tha streetz and business iz business/ :thumbup: