e-dubz vs datruth29
 

iight 6-8 lines..blind spit due 10 mins after check
no hate crew or d/r votes
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goodluck

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132586

I'll vote on this one when Ya'll finish if you check this battle out

i get under yo skin leave....... yo with the derma-tolo-gist
but this is only stage one cause....... murda-will-follow-this
i roll wit savage factions dat peruse with ravage actions to flip on any mc
the average facts dat ur tossin senseless disses like throwin pennies at me
leave all opposers fucked..multiply my genes exponentially
and quintessentially ex-pose how yo flip-flows elementary
Datruth like a fuckin gay ‘dog’, its obvious this ‘bitch’ is queer
its like i got you insultin friends the way i make you diss-a-peer(disapear)

I swear, it's curtains, e-dubz challenged me? yet, he writes the most generic verses/
not to mension that this kid took his fuckin name from Eric Sermon (E-dub)/
you rock better? show me how/ Like oragami, i'll fold you and your Fony style/
from what i've read of you so far, your game seems real "spoiled"... like an only child/
I own ya, yea I'll expose ya, what now/ high off whack juice, you need to come down/
I'll cut your hand off just to give you another thumb down, you dumb clow, I won now/
You reach for the Crown in vain/ you're Flow can be compared to water, they're both going down the drain/ man, your shit is sounding lame/ basically, you sound the same/

Dayum that battle was totally one sided.

E-Dubz: You had good structure and flow. Your punchlines just werent hittin, wasnt any personals, need better use of multis also.

DaTruth29: Shit was ill kid, esp for the time limit that there was. I thought the structure coulda been a lil better. When put to a beat though, it flowed good. Good use of personals, esp about his name lol.

v/Truth

need more multis? nearly my whole verse was multis..fuckin d/r

uppin..

Clarification...
towards the bottom of my spit, I meant to say..
"i'll cut off your hand just to give you another thumb down, you dumb clown"

dubz verse is better.truth u need to rhyme and u need personals adding his name into a prewrite doesnt count.u need to read the tutorials and learn how to make personals and punches and all.dubz not ur greatest but enough for him his verse was bad.good punches u get my vote for the good punches better than his and u had flow he didnt simple as this

v/dubz

fa sho, keep em comin ya'll

uppin

e-dubz drop:

i get under yo skin leave....... yo with the derma-tolo-gist
but this is only stage one cause....... murda-will-follow-this
pretty good opener it was nice 7/10
i roll wit savage factions dat peruse with ravage actions to flip on any mc
the average facts dat ur tossin senseless disses like throwin pennies at me
nice yet again 7.5/10
leave all opposers fucked..multiply my genes exponentially
and quintessentially ex-pose how yo flip-flows elementary
it punch....6.5/10
Datruth like a fuckin gay ‘dog’, its obvious this ‘bitch’ is queer
its like i got you insultin friends the way i make you diss-a-peer
nice shit here 7.5/10

overall: 7/10

Truth's Drop:

I swear, it's curtains, e-dubz challenged me? yet, he writes the most generic verses/
not to mension that this kid took his fuckin name from Eric Sermon /
weak & stretched bad combo 4/10
you rock better? show me how/
Like oragami, i'll fold you and your Fony style/
from what i've read of you so far, your game seems real "spoiled"... like an only child/
weak ass shit 1/10
I own ya, yea I'll expose ya, what now/ high off whack juice, you need to come down/
I'll cut your hand off just to give you another thumb down, you dumb clow, I won now/
decent 6/10
You reach for the Crown in vain/
you're Flow can be compared to water, they're both going down the drain/
OoOoO wow that shit was hard.....NOT!!!!! 3/10
man, your shit is sounding lame/
basically, you sound the same/
I suggest elevation???? 0/10

overall: 2/10 (yes 2 no lie)

vote: E-Dubz



^^^ill???fuckin' madd dickrides here...



do a honest vote on my shit links in the signature.

This kid is 14, no 14 years old votes man, he is being biased, when I get votes, he calls it dick riding.. I honestly think that I had better personals(the stolen name from eric sermon), more punclines, and my flow wasn't forced, read it....

PLUS, WHO IS CHEATING? YESTERDAY I HAD TWO VOTES AND TODAY I ONLY HAVE ONE... SOMEBODY ERASED A VOTE MAN, WHO?

it was taken off cuz it wasnt explained...cuz it was d/r anyway uppin