sought to see
 

yea i write some poetry too.. i know this is kinda short tho


you watching me?
from up above
ya outta be
to prove your love
you sought to see
i had to be shown
i caught ur plee
i cant do this alone

damn short but to da point...good poem...liked it...give dat a 8/10

short and simple

straight to the point ..pretty good

I didn't like this too much, it's more along the lines of prose. Poetry expresses emotion and description. Emotion, this poem has. The latter, cero.

fuck you its more of a cry out to my dead father but fuck him n fuck you.. i hope your pussy is loose

..haha. Well, it was short... It sounded like those poems that they were reading on VH-1 from Jewels book...too short, and a little blah. Miss lyricist was right, no matter if you like it or not :)

yea it was short


ROFL^ on that loose pussy remark.. lmao...... dont speak to women like that ...

short as hell for that I can't judge this drop accurately...

sall good..

and ill treat hoes how i want so step