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Terumoto 07-01-04 01:30 AM

One-Man-Band vs Big Woody
 
orright...

no line limit.. just not too long

house rules for everything else

Terumoto 07-01-04 02:34 AM

k ill go first..

when spoken my words-can addict with flow and most-of-my-cursing..
cats keep recordings on their person, you can even overdose-on-my-verses..
lock-n-load, "stone" you so much they shatter-ya-bones, "rockin"-ya-dome..
murder you so gruesome, you cop front page of the washington-post..

I hack-n-splinter, laugh-n-rip-ya, im gonna smack-this-bitch-up...
the kids liar.. even if he copped “anal” he couldnt “back-his-shit-up”..
I-rap-to-get-tough, droppin hot verses front,-back-n-centre..
This noob wants a rep.. "springs" from nowhere like "after-winter"..

stoppin-his-throws n his-hits, i mean business, dishin out twice-the-hurt..
with the nicest-verse, the guy-gets-merked, ima slice n dice-this-herb..
this guy just dies-to-flirt with death, watch as my verbs fry-this-jerk..
name big woody... but one and all can see he thought lyin-would work..

nuthin but drone,-youll copy n clone-the shit in songs till ya careers over..
ya aint large, big woody aint your penis it just means-that you got a boner..
slow-ta respond.. n hit.. youd think after 100 posts-ya rhymes'd-be-iller..
lines-are-just-filler.. bout as exciting as "corn flakes" n im the "serial" killer..

this is shit you get scars-off... burn him with shit you get charred-from..
Watch when his verse comes.. he'll be actin thug but cant get a "hard-on"..
this kid starts beef with me for no reason, look how decent i treat-him..
didnt wanna battle, but i removed half my brain to make this thing even..

YuNG TiLT 07-04-04 12:26 AM

iight my turn

I have a hard time believing that you're from a "battle joint".....
Fuckin wit me, your career will reach its ending point.....
And wat made you believe that you're a "One Man Band"??....
I think you should stop jerkin, and rest your sweat gland....
But you are tha type of nigga who can nut on command....
Tryin to rap battle, and makin a betta use of your right hand....
You think u can beat me?? I think your having a wet dream....
Your punches comes softer than melted neopolitan ice cream....
And your personals are as sweet as a sweater your grandma nit....
That's why I come wit punches that always seem to hit.....
Left ya ass dazed, I think I sunked your battle ship.....
Got u gaspin for air like you are an asmatic....
Now you left wit nothin but a confussion head trip.....
While my rhymes got you shakin like you're epileptic.....
My shit comes 5 stars like a movie wit Denzel..........(Denzel Washington-Training Day)
And your rhymes scheme comes ugly like Sam Cassell............(PG 4 tha Timberwolves)
So get use to L's dogg, kause I'm made-to-win.......
U couldn't get a W even if u sold your soul to Satin.........

holla

YuNG TiLT 07-04-04 12:30 AM

In somethin u wrote u said somethin about a grudge, there's no grudge, i juss find u as competition, that's all that's it.

IIGHT my nigga?? Juss a friendly battle

YuNG TiLT 07-04-04 12:31 AM

............................uppin 4 Votes......................

Terumoto 07-04-04 12:36 AM

yeah friedly battle. need some votes though... what took you so long to reply??

plus im not black, so dont call me nigga.

and your probably not black.. so unless you are.. maybe stop saying it??

YuNG TiLT 07-04-04 12:38 AM

i'll post my pic in mugshots don't trip, but u really can't see me
lol

my bad about tha nigga word, habit kause i'm black

Terumoto 07-04-04 01:58 AM

nah its cool.. ill take your word for it.. im just so sick of white guys who go on the net and pretend to be black... i mean its not gonna get them anywhere... but yeah...


uppin for votes


one

Ca'lam 07-04-04 02:15 AM

mmmm..

woody:
I have a hard time believing that you're from a "battle joint".....
Fuckin wit me, your career will reach its ending point.....
^ok.. on the weaker side for a opener..but ok
You think u can beat me?? I think your having a wet dream....
Your punches comes softer than melted neopolitan ice cream....
^strongest punch, it was decent..lil weak to be the best tho

one:
when spoken my words-can addict with flow and most-of-my-cursing..
cats keep recordings on their person, you can even overdose-on-my-verses..
^eh..flowed good..good multies..but wheres the punch?bad opener,good bar tho..
I hack-n-splinter, laugh-n-rip-ya, im gonna smack-this-bitch-up...
the kids liar.. even if he copped “anal” he couldnt “back-his-shit-up”..
^second line had nice punch...
slow-ta respond.. n hit.. youd think after 100 posts-ya rhymes'd-be-iller..
lines-are-just-filler.. bout as exciting as "corn flakes" n im the "serial" killer..
^eh..sounds good..weak punch tho


this is shit you get scars-off... burn him with shit you get charred-from..
Watch when his verse comes.. he'll be actin thug but cant get a "hard-on"..
this kid starts beef with me for no reason, look how decent i treat-him..
didnt wanna battle, but i removed half my brain to make this thing even..
^decent closer..might have won it for you
overall:it came down to the flow and structure of the verses..punch wise, they were both close to the same..flow goes to band, and so does structure..

v/band

YuNG TiLT 07-04-04 05:10 PM

.......................uppin 4 Votes....................

YuNG TiLT 07-05-04 04:02 PM

...............................uppin.............. .....

Terumoto 07-06-04 12:24 AM

BUMP 4 votes................... ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

YuNG TiLT 07-06-04 05:29 PM

.........................Uppin & Bumpin..............................

Magic5 07-06-04 07:50 PM

One-Man-Band
structure was ok...some of ur lines were stretched though...flow was decent, flow off a little cause of the stretched lines...u had tight metas...wordplay was tight as well...most of ur punches connected...ok personals...

Big Woody
structure was ok...some of ur lines were goin everywhere...flow was pretty good...pretty good metas...wordplay was also pretty good...some of ur punches connected...ok personals....

Overall
Big Woody had the more stable flow...both had an ok structure...and both had ok personals...One-Man-Band had more, and better metas...as well as better wordplay...more of his punches connected too...so basing off of that...One-Man-Band gets my vote...

VOTE - ONE-MAN-BAND

PLEASE return the favor with in honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx man...

Terumoto 07-07-04 05:50 AM

uppin for votes.................................... and just so ya know, voters, woodys first line has "battle joint" in it, which was my old location..... just lettin ya know so you still get his personal

one


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