C.M.F.S .:vs:. QBsmasher
 

10 lines...
no crew...
you can spit first if you want...
i aint gonna feed coz i did mine already...

chekin in...

My bad cuz, I didnt even know you and I had a battle going. LOL, i was just lookin thru posts and was like damn. But here:

Im safe till you get me lit like dynamite
I know your gonna come soft like anthracite
But you wont be able to match what i had to say
If you were jessica simpson and took my breath away
You couldnt read my rhymes if you were the paper
Not even if you burnt it and inhaled the vapor
I write verses harder than tutankhamen
Curse is so sick sudden death is not uncommon
Ive taken and layed more tracks than C-S-X
Congress couldnt fund enough to save your text


GL

C.M.F.S .:vs:. QBsmasher
 

here goes....



Que Ball smasher his name... Queen Bitch, and jabber of poo /
This foolz scared to catch aids... Gee Its probably caught you //

Damn your whole wack verse... and not a single hard punch /
Man you should'a spat first... at a homosexual bar lunch //

I think your probably the gayest fag... too ever be riddlin /
You know you can get anus lag... from bein train drivin //

bet when ya get home...you read my lines and masterbate /
then set ya cell phone... to feel the rhymes on via-brate //

text styles you read in shame because... i lyrically killed ya /
Next time you see my name it looks... particually familiar //


nice drop...poll is set at 50 posts to vote... good luck

C.M.F.S .:vs:. QBsmasher
 

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C.M.F.S .:vs:. QBsmasher
 

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cmfs gets my vote not a bad battle.qb ur verse was weaker but they were both good.cmfs u had a strong opener and closer.qb nice opener and closer it was hard but not as hard as his.u both had flow and strucutre cmfs ur setup was better.harder personals cmfs takes this so for a harder verse and stropmger cmfs gets my vote

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

QBSMASHER
Im safe till you get me lit like dynamite
I know your gonna come soft like anthracite
good metiphore on 2nd line 5/10
But you wont be able to match what i had to say
If you were jessica simpson and took my breath away
ur in wrong tense with had,good metiphore/wordplay 5/10
You couldnt read my rhymes if you were the paper
Not even if you burnt it and inhaled the vapor
paper can't read either, seemed filler 3/10
I write verses harder than tutankhamen
Curse is so sick sudden death is not uncommon
i didnt think tutankhamen cursed with sudden death. 4/10
Ive taken and layed more tracks than C-S-X
Congress couldnt fund enough to save your text
last bar very nice. 7/10

aside from that last bar all your lines were mediocre. It wasn't bad but it wasn't good. no hate. Just work on it.
34/50

CMFS
Que Ball smasher his name... Queen Bitch, and jabber of poo /
This foolz scared to catch aids... Gee Its probably caught you //
not feelin the poo line. but the aid was ok. 5/10
Damn your whole wack verse... and not a single hard punch /
Man you should'a spat first... at a homosexual bar lunch //
feedin. no no. 2/10
I think your probably the gayest fag... too ever be riddlin /
You know you can get anus lag... from bein train drivin //
you kinda punch'd urself knowin about anal lag. 2/10
bet when ya get home...you read my lines and masterbate /
then set ya cell phone... to feel the rhymes on via-brate //
its ok. jus no punch. all sexual mush. 3/10
text styles you read in shame because... i lyrically killed ya /
Next time you see my name it looks... particually familiar //
not feelin this last bar. seem's confusing 2/10

No offense but you do need some work. You probly make alot more sense to yourself than you do to other's. you should work on bein more comprehensible. It's ok tho. no hat. Just work on that.
14/50

Vote/QBsmasher

ok, WHAT THREW ME OFF WAS THAT THIS DUDE KEPT CALLING qb GAY, AND TALKIN ABOUT ANUS AND HOMOSEXUALS AND SHIT.. tHAT FIRST OF ALL ISN'T CLEVER AND SECOND OF ALL, IT WAS GAY.. qb CAME OUT WITH TWO QUICK PUNCHLINES, AND THEN CAME WITH A DECENT PUNCH EVERY BAR AFTER..
ALSO qb HAD A VERY NICE AND SIMPLE STRUCTURE AND IT WAS PLEASANT TO READ..

i HAVE TO HAND THIS ONE TO QB

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This was a boring battles. I know QB could have done better (trust me on that, lol) but both of y'all came weak and finshed weak. However, because C kept using the play'd gay jokes, though they were used in a way that I never heard before, it would have been better if he just kept it original.

Vote- QB

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ill vote on this if u drop an honest vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133281