lilchiofthachi vs lyricalflowz23
 

house rules 5-10 lines first to 5 wins 3-0 ko

u r dogg casue i dont spit first cause i got so many battles

yo vote on this battle..then ill come back here and drop a vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132255

iight nigga u went 2 far when u talk about Chitown,Im tha prince and ill show u tha crown/
lyricalflowz dont kid urself,u aint no good u need me jus 2 get ja wealth/
u fake dont put tupac as ur avacator,imma shoot u now and slit ur throat lata/
battlin u is fun 2 do,this practice 2 me its a championship battle 2 u/
take 23 out ur name ur neva be tha greatest,keep tryin 2 rap u betta hope my flowz contagious

lyrical ill vote on this if u drop anhonest explained vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132816

my lyrics will murder ya'll/ you'll get hit so hard you'll just take a fall/ cause my punch lines will kill ya'll/ strait up it'll hit u in the face like a punch in the jaw/ like i said il murder you/ make you my hoe/ hop u on your knees and go down low/ cause u you cant touch my flow/ so this is the rap im sendin u/ ill have u fucked up like u got the flu/ you'll be so pissed your gonna wanna sue/ but u wont cause you'll realize that i just kilt chu.

dawg u gotta challeng pple in tha bith slapped forum dawg but thats straight since u got heart come tryout for Tha Killas

Lyrical i look at a lot of your battles, and I notice you always do have pretty good flow and structure. As with this case, you were right on point with that again. You did use some personals also, about chitown lol looks like you made him mad when you said that. No use of any multis or metas in this verse though, those always help. You had a couple punches that connected, I think you coulda elevated on this and had more punches though.

lilchiofthachi I wasnt feelin ya flow at all. You were also throwing generic punches, you need to elevate those cause they were wack. Drop in more personals also, those hit real hard. You just werent up to par with Lyrical on this battle.

v/Lyrical

ill vote on this if u drop an honest vote in this battle

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132721

iight lyrical good punches and good flow on some points. but it seemed like every 2 lines ryhmes and there were no mutiples, but u used personals 2.

and chi i think maybe like most of da ppl here you spit your ryhmes differntly and we need 2 hear it 2 understand your flow but dis is text and i didnt see any punches or personals.

my vote is lyric but just 2 let u kno chi-town will kill yo ass man

Lyrical
i get down on da mic, and ur style is used,
battling me ur guarenteed 2 get broke and abused,
Simple. Basic. Punch. 3/10
u should treat my lyrics like ur still in school,
but dont flirt wit girls and pretend ur cool,
Blah. 2/10
cuz when i grab da mic i start to get clever,
my styles got more switchups, than the weather,
Blah. 3/10
postin a battle with me without lettin me know,
now im going 2 lyrically bury u 6 ft below,
the 6 feet thing is played. 1/10
ill battle u and all the crew u have up ther in Chitown,
murder ya'll 1 by 1, and leave the bodies where they wont be found.
personal. basic punch. 3/10
Lyrical I'll be honest. Your verse is way to simple. You need to spice it up. Give it sum Pep,Zest,Spark. Work on your punches and originality and put more in your lines.
12/50

LilChi
fixed structure...
iight nigga u went 2 far when u talk about Chitown,
Im tha prince and ill show u tha crown/
Fed. Your showin him ur jewelry. WOW. 1/10
lyricalflowz dont kid urself,
u aint no good u need me jus 2 get ja wealth/
NO. 1/10
u fake dont put tupac as ur avacator,
imma shoot u now and slit ur throat lata/
dumb personal. doesn't ryhme 1/10
battlin u is fun 2 do,
this practice 2 me its a championship battle 2 u/
Ok I guess.. kinda 2/10
take 23 out ur name ur neva be tha greatest,
keep tryin 2 rap u betta hope my flowz contagious
good personal. kinda 3/10
I dunno. Work on everything. I fixed your structure. Thats how it should look. Make some punches. Don't feed. Use non-obviouse personal's. And come more clever. Do everything lol. No Hate.
8/50

Vote/Lyrical

Hit up the Batte's in my sig wit honest votes. Thanks.

i get down on da mic, and ur style is used,
battling me ur guarenteed 2 get broke and abused,
wack..wack opener 5/10
u should treat my lyrics like ur still in school,
but dont flirt wit girls and pretend ur cool,
lmao..WAAAAAACK..lmao..wow..4/10
cuz when i grab da mic i start to get clever,
my styles got more switchups, than the weather,
at least u did a punchline..6/10
postin a battle with me without lettin me know,
now im going 2 lyrically bury u 6 ft below,
WAACK..just exploitin urself sayin u hot 5/10
ill battle u and all the crew u have up ther in Chitown,
murder ya'll 1 by 1, and leave the bodies where they wont be found.
wack..simplistic..exploitin again..5/10

iight nigga u went 2 far when u talk about Chitown,Im tha prince and ill show u tha crown/
lyricalflowz dont kid urself,u aint no good u need me jus 2 get ja wealth/
WAACK..fed off his rhymes..lose points 4 dat..4/10
u fake dont put tupac as ur avacator,imma shoot u now and slit ur throat lata/
battlin u is fun 2 do,this practice 2 me its a championship battle 2 u/
waack...waaack..waaack...waaack..5/10
take 23 out ur name ur neva be tha greatest,keep tryin 2 rap u betta hope my flowz contagious
wtf..that all u got?! 1/10

i dont even need to add yall numbers up..lyricalflowz won cuz he had more bars...'

Can yall please vote on my current battle please..vote honestly and professionally
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133302

Lyrical won this easily. I was gettin lost in chi's flow. Lyrical had punches in most of his lines that were alright. But that was enough ta beat Chi's verse.

Vote - Lyrical

vote on mah battle against JaeBurnz...Link's in the sig..

lyrical: hahahahah kid you merked him........you had better punches......
your flow was a shitload better than his at all points of your drop......
vocab was silly and not very big words but vocab is not needed in
regular battles anywayz....................................origina lity/creativity
was decent nothin' special........................................... ..

chi: hmmhmhmhmhmhmmmmmmmm.................... you've been merked
you came very weak in every single category, punches were weak....
and didn't fit well, structure don't matter & your flow was weak & lines
were too stretched!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
vocab was the decent part of your drop but.... in regular text battles
that is not required............originality/creativity was not there kid...

vote: lyricalflowz23