QBsmasher Vs Orijinal
 

10 lines
n/crew
n/hate
n/dr
Both verses due 30 min from now

check in nikka....play it right...hollla one111111

Battle? Thought you was up for the nobel peace prize
Realize your soon to be murked, like you had taliban ties
What possessed you to even challenge me to do battle
I throw "haymakers" and emcees herd to me like cattle
Im a premonition of what these rappers keep wishin to be like
Well keep wishin, them training wheels aint comin off that bike
Your flows not even nominal, and should be toppled like dominos
Leave you a amputee or quadrapalegic, ask superman if ya dont believe it
Youll leave this post a beliver, goin into a seizures, ya poetry reader
Im fresh like red cedar, you couldnt flow if you were a free bleeder,

QBsmasher, wow, I must sense you play football right?/
Well, you’ll be prayin ‘Hail Mary’ when you battle me tonight/ (Hail Mary is a football play)
I see you ‘New to RB’, but once U battle me, you leavin’/
You couldn’t even ‘cum’ at me if you were filled wit seamen/ (cum=come)
Givin’ me 30 minutes to spit, while I can spit a hot verse in 60 seconds/
The otha 29 minutes, I was fuckin’ ya girl and runnin’ errands/
I just battled this fake Em, so I can get my record higher/
This guy couldn’t be Eminem if he dyed his face whiter/
So now, you just faced Warren Sapp, you just got tackled in a battle/
I’ll put his head on my wall, so I can put winnings on a mantle/ (mantle is like a display like deer heads for a hunter so they can see how many deers they killed)

upppin this battle....lemme gett sum honest and professional voting...drop a link and ill hit it up..1

hahah
You couldn’t even ‘cum’ at me if you were filled wit seamen/ (cum=come)
Givin’ me 30 minutes to spit, while I can spit a hot verse in 60 seconds/
The otha 29 minutes, I was fuckin’ ya girl and runnin’ errands/
I just battled this fake Em, so I can get my record higher/
This guy couldn’t be Eminem if he dyed his face whiter/
^^ill right there^^
qb u had a dope verse too- i think orijinal had better personals -- orijinal wait for the explanations till the end it makes ur structure looked fucked up

v/orijinal

return favor in sigg

QB- Your Dominoes Line, and The Haymaker line were pretty decent... short verse to point- decent structure flowed pretty good... Lookin pretty good for someone new to the site... Good Luck in the future

Orijinal- Your Opener and the Runnin Erands lines were the best... Your structure was a little more disrupted in the battle, This is pretty close contest to me in my eyes so I just compared the two parts I liked best from each of your verses and the Runnin Erands line I think was the best punch in the battle... Vote Orijinal... Good Luck both of you... Please return the favor.. http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131305

hmm

orijinal: good flow...ok structure..sick punches n personals..the opener was sickness...and the closer was aiight
you had no multi's that i saw
but you had some meta's
overall good shit

QB: good shit but put somethin after your lines like......... or -
didnt see too much multi's...ok meta's
good punches n personals
overall

vote: ORIJINAL

i aint gon' poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132255

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754

Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win....

Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=(

Orijinal won this one. He had some good disses. The cum and the Eminem lines were tite. They both had good verses, but Orijinal gets the vote.

vote - Orijinal

uppin it once more..dont sleep kids....is a good battle..drop a link n ill hit it up...1111

my vote goes to orijinal but yo neva eva explain ur punches eva it makes u sound fuckin stupid.aight nice battle u had good flow and good punches it sounded like a fresh verse i like that.keep it up.qb u need a lot of work learn how to use good personals and make better punches.not bad flow but ur verse wasnt good enough quality to get my vote aight keep practice

v/orijinal
return the favor hit up my battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132645

QBsmasher Drop:

Battle? Thought you was up for the nobel peace prize
Realize your soon to be murked, like you had taliban ties
best opener I've seen from you yet.... 6.5/10
What possessed you to even challenge me to do battle
I throw "haymakers" and emcees herd to me like cattle
weak punch overall: 5/10
Im a premonition of what these rappers keep wishin to be like
Well keep wishin, them training wheels aint comin off that bike
weak the punch basically went nowhere... 4.5/10
Your flows not even nominal, and should be toppled like dominos
Leave you a amputee or quadrapalegic, ask superman if ya dont believe it
dominos & it fon't rhyme & that takes points away.... 4/10
Youll leave this post a beliver, goin into a seizures, ya poetry reader
Im fresh like red cedar, you couldnt flow if you were a free bleeder
nice punch best in the drop 7/10

overall: 6/10

Orijinal Drop:

QBsmasher, wow, I must sense you play football right?/
Well, you’ll be prayin ‘Hail Mary’ when you battle me tonight/
nice personal used his name against him I like dat shit 7/10
I see you ‘New to RB’, but once U battle me, you leavin’/
You couldn’t even ‘cum’ at me if you were filled wit seamen/
hahaha got me to laugh nice job 8/10
Givin’ me 30 minutes to spit, while I can spit a hot verse in 60 seconds/
The otha 29 minutes, I was fuckin’ ya girl and runnin’ errands/
weak this concept is played nice try tho 5/10
I just battled this fake Em, so I can get my record higher/
This guy couldn’t be Eminem if he dyed his face whiter/
nice use anything against peeps feelin it 7/10
So now, you just faced Warren Sapp, you just got tackled in a battle/
I’ll put his head on my wall, so I can put winnings on a mantle/
pretty nice punch dawg 7.5/10

overall: 7.5/10

(both of ya'll got a lil extra for flow)

vote: Orijinal

and QB this is not a hate vote want proof here it is:

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...15&postcount=11

(he voted against me peeps!)